摘要
Work In Progress.
Please Don't Read With Expectations.
Just Publishing it to help with writing.
Super Slow Upload Schedule (1-2 chap/year).
No Harem.
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4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Im gonna put this here for the simple reason it's a Vampyr fic(I'm obssessed with the game). Please dont abandon it. <3 Im gonna put this here for the simple reason it's a Vampyr fic(I'm obssessed with the game). Please dont abandon it. <3
Dude your writing has been fun so far. The story has a lot of potential and while there are only four chapters out right now, I feel like this story could be one that I can wait for. I hope that you finish it at sometime and can't wait for the next update.
Vampyr is one of my favorite video games of all time. I think this is the first Fanfiction of it that I have found. I'm looking forward to more chapters.
what a waste, having such a beautiful pen and making such a muddy story, the first chapter is important to make you want to follow up, and I don't want to continue. I don't feel like reading nobility, I don't feel like reading TVD, but something that looks like a good story without being one. I don't get the impression that you read many books before writing this story in the sf genre but more criminal novels like Agatha Cristy. good luck