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"In a world where your magic determines where you stand in life, comes a girl who will prove everyone that weaklings can become strong too.”
Kang Mi Young is a simple young girl who dreamt of entering the most prestigious and well reputed academy where well-known and powerful Mages used to study. In their country, your potential in using magic is very important because it determines where you stand in the hierarchy. As a daughter of an Intermediate Mage with the Hydro element, many people doubt that she could even pass the entrance exam. However, during her journey in order to prove everyone wrong, Mi Young displayed many formidable talents that no one could top; thus she was called "The Unsurpassed Maiden".
However, despite having a simple goal which is to make the whole kingdom know that even the weakest Mage can rise to the top, she discovers more adventures and secrets that will make her whole world go upside down.
(Fanart not mine. Found it on Pinterest. Credits to the true owner.)
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waaaah amazing storrryyy!~ I love girl power stories because they're really interesting... looking forward to the action scenes u-u I hope this story will gain more attention and love uwu
I LVOE STORIES LIKE THIS! GIRL POWER IS INDEED COOL! I HOPE THE AUTHOR WILL MAKE THE STORY EVEN MORE INTERESTING! AND ALSO PLEASE LET IT BE A LOVE TRIANGLE BETWEEN THE THREE CHILDREN OF THE FOUR GREAT CLANS HAHAHAHA
Amazing grammars, excellent in English and nice story. The mc is girl I like it 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I like how the story progressed, especially how you based some elements on Genshin!! Keep it going!! Are there any pics of the characters? XD
I enjoy reading this and Mi Young's astonishing abilities to be unsurpassed. At some times, it catches me off guard and I'm not sure if I'm inspired by it or simply just admiring it. The stability of updates makes me wonder if the author is surpassing their own limits to keep writing. If so, keep going, if not KEEP GOING. I cannot wait to see how the story develops from here. The characters are quite human, and the world seems to be getting fleshed out in detail. I'm excited.
A creative story with a great premise. I love the exam question the book starts with! The answer was totally not what I expected. Good job author!
This book is interesting to read! It's give me goosebumps when I read the first chapter! I like the name of the academy! its very unique. looking forward for mi young. keep it up author and goodluck for wsa!. I also added it on my library!
Too many alt, which I find rather annoying sometimes, there is also someone who are promoting their novel without getting asked which is really rude in someone's book, go delete that author unless it was your friend. Might change the star to be better if it was true
i super love this novel... it makes me excited to see the what"s in the next chapter... you cannot wait to read on and on.. never have a dull reading... nice one authir😘👌👍
YEEEES GIRL POWEEEEER! I love reading stories like this because it catches my interest and would make me read more about the book. This story should gain more attention and love from the readers at this app!! More plot twists to come please!
i love the story so far, even though read a few chapter's. it is remarkable, i love fantasy magic, mages and wizardry....just like a games i used to play ..hope that this story will have a break in online games its very interesting..... i love you author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I do hope this story will gain attention from moviemakers because i believe this will be a hit!! From the character development to the denouement is perfectly crafted that i want some more of it! Kudos to the author!!
aaaaaaah I was screaming walkthrough chapter one!!! This is so *chefskiss great!!!. I bet the MC is an overpowered chosen one. I'm a sucker for Female Protagonists who were obviously strong, brave, stands up for themselves and so dom like. The plot is great, and it made me want to camp again and binge read another one (and I had more than dozen to reeeead!. The grammar is great, just one tiny advice. Author-nim be wary of wall texts. BUT THIS IS A 5/5 FOR ME. I got hooked again.
I know theres more to this story than meets the eye and im so ready to be part of this awesome adventure with mi young and the rest of the characters. Im so proud i found this story
I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOO MUUUUCH. I HOPE EVERYONE GETS TO READ THIS AWESOME STORY CAUSE ITS WORTH IT AND PERFECT!!!!! KUDOS TO AUTHOR NIM!!!
For some reason im getting more hook with the story as i read on. I realy love stories like this one. Good job author, more power to you and your future works
For a fantasy book with a mage and nature elements, I can see a lot of potential on first sight. The four elements chose Mi Young, and I would say that it's a savage thing I saw. Everyone loved this kind of girl power stories everywhere, and you got me there. However, there are good points and things to improve that I wanted to point out. Good points: 1) Having an independent woman brings me back to the story of Divergent series, a dystopian novel that depicts a woman that wanted to change her element. 2) The first three chapters really do a great portrayal of what the story really is. 3) The title speak for itself. You just have to read the synopsis and the first chapter, and that's a good thing. Things to improve: 1) The cover couldn't seem to attract an intriguing element I wanted to find inside your story. 2) The synopsis looks well, but it doesn't have the BRIEF overview of what the story really about. 3) You could improve the descriptions more. Overall, your story has the potential the way it is. There's always a room for improvement, and yours will do good here on Webnovel too. Good luck with the competition!
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Omo😍, an op mc girl really caught my eye with any delay. Those twists and turns of the situation makes my heart pumped and wanting more chap to come. Hoping that this will constantly be updated🙈. Sending lots of love to the author😘❤️
for some reason my other review did not reflect here but...I WANT TO TELL THE AUTHOR A VERY GOOD JOB AND THAT HER WORK IS REALLY AMAZING. THE PLOT IS ALSO VERY INTERESTING!! MORE POWER!!
I've read the first few chapters and as far as I've observed, the writing is splendid. It is progressive in both world building and plot, and the character personality is distinct. You can come give it a try, I recommend.