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I like it, the grammar is slightly wonky though. Other than that, it is a good light read. I recommend to read it .......................... . .......
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寫檢討I like it, the grammar is slightly wonky though. Other than that, it is a good light read. I recommend to read it .......................... . .......
作者 Dar_Y
This is rushed. An example is when someone was introduced as an orphan. It is too in the face, and the world is similarly treated. For an apocalypse, the informations is like those who that didn't experience one.