/ Fantasy / The unknown world where I was summoned
摘要
"Where am I"
As he opened his eyes, he saw a whole new world.
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Dev Sharma is a normal unemployed man whose life is full of misery and suffering. So, he decided to die. But, instead of dying, he got summoned to a whole new world.
Follow the adventures of Dev as he tries to live his life in this brand-new world without regrets.
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Bro, I'm gonna be honest with you. You need to improve badly ... The grammar is bad, there is little to no depth in the story and the first chapter which is supposed to provide the most detail is missing important parts that contribute to the entire quality of the story. Concept wise, it's decent, but other than that, there is much to be done. Don't worry we are all beginners here, so it's obvious we have to try our best I'm rooting for you.
Not too many chapters out yet, but I'm looking forward to Gandalf's adventures along with the protagonist. The world-building already looks promising, and I hope for more soon! Rogersberg, here we come!
Interesting start. The imagination of the story is wonderful. A person who wants to end his life travelled to another world. I am curious to know how will he survive. Keep going on author.[img=update][img=update]
Wow in all my years of novel reading I have never came across a story like this, the synopsis intrigued me and the first chapter was truly satisfying well 👍👍👍👍👍
The story is nice. It is just starting out and it seems to hold potential.Keep going author!!
the synopsis didn't give alot but the first chapter arose my curiosity.. the writing style is unique and the plot and setting is rare..one of it's kind