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I am in Dragon Ball, as a clone of Goku and Vegeta made by Dr. Gero. To be honest, this is going to be awesome and horrifying, isn't it? On the plus side, Android 21 might probably exist. I guess I have a goal now.
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寫檢討The novel would have been much better if the author had not included the other versions of the MC from other universes (DC, Invincible, etc.), I literally skipped paragraphs every time Connor appeared.
It doesn’t make sense to me ,this just feels forced . If he’s the strongest just go namik For the dragon balls
it was good until you started introducing the othe soul parts and you really did not need to do that because there is so much stuff in dragonball so why introduce other animes
Very good, it's very rare to see a good Dragon Ball fanfic nowadays, this one is at least in the top 5.Very good, it's very rare to see a good Dragon Ball fanfic nowadays, this one is at least in the top 5.
When will the Saiyan journey to power and lonely Kryptonian be released again? It's been a while without releasing chapters ? .................................
i tried reading this but to be honest the idea is good but the novel became a drama. the synopsis is not close to what this is. the time skips are every where and relationships are kind just there. I found myself skipping loads of text because of monologue questions about direction. pretty much fluff to pad character count. Author don't get me wrong I don't knock your effort but when you're side characters become more interesting than your MC their is a problem
It is a very good story but I would like to see the stories of all the other 6 fragments of his sole......DC one has good potential for lemon wish fulfilment OP Mc......so I hope the author writes about it......also more frequent updates are appreciated.
So why not merge the Super Saiyan 4 and Super Saiyan God transformations ? ............................................................................................
A nice fanfic, the grammar is good with very few mistakes. The MC is not an idi*t and there aren't major plot holes that I could find. The flow was good and logical. But I only read till chapter 14 and dropped it cuz I found myself a little bored with no plot happening as the MC was only planning and training for the future without actually fighting anyone. Maybe at the later chapters this changes but I'm too impatient to wait.
Author, I think it's best that you finish your already released stories before you start posting new stories because some haven't been released for months.
Then the omnitrix wielder will launch when.................................................,..................................................................?
I genuinely adore this novel; it is truly the epitome of excellence. However, I am inclined to express a heartfelt disappointment regarding its brevity.
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Are there Lemons???