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Mark, dropped to his left knee & propped his right elbow on his hip, holding firm his sniper rifle until he had the Suspect in his sight.
Gripping his sniper, Mark aimed straight at the suspect's head as he held a woman at gunpoint.
Mark took a deep breath and was about to pull the trigger, but the next second he found himself in a room.
Author: I will upload whenever I want... I am doing this for fun, so if I get some good reviews I will continue this story.
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mind-blowing experience .love the storyline keep going .don't you dare stop or take a break .sorry that came out wrong i mean keep up brilliant work . I'm going to continue reading this book and thanks for the nicest exp.
well, it's a nice book with op character, so I am in. well, it's a nice book with op character, so I am in. well, it's a nice book with op character, so I am in.
The olden story base was good. This one's premise of making a fictitious enemy for the sake of granting him wishes or for that reason was not really necessary. other than that, I felt this idea is a really good and fresh one and has great potential. Looking forward for your next update.
Nice story so far👍👍 MC has good abilities[img=recommend] Looking forward to more chapters... [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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so did you die? because its been a month, you can not make Thor think he was about to die then decide to drop...….if it takes any longer you wont have to worry about dropping because the readers will just give up on it.
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Awesome pls don't stop. Keep it going on Awesome [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
before you read it, I would like to say few things. first, mc is stupidly powerfull and if you don't like op characters then Don't read it. he have only two love interest, Felicia and Supergirl. and it's very much a wish Fulfilment story, if you don't like that then don't waste your time here.
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