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The True Dragon (TenSura – Hiatus)

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作者: chianlao

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chianlao

The writing quality of my novel is okay at best. My vocabulary isn't large, so some sentences may seem weird. The story development is atrocious, but that was when I decided I actually wanted to write my own story and not rewrite the whole of Tensura. I don't really remember if I said any character designs, but if I did, they were bad. And don't even get me started on the updating stability! It may not be as bad as some people, but the chapters won't come any time soon, I bet you that. I don't think I did a good job on giving people correct information on the background of Tensura.

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Priest_Yuri

Frankly I love for once it's not a fanfic on tensura with the main mc who is not rimuru so just for his 5 stars (the comment is translated by automatic correction with French as a basis)

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Fuckyall

Good start Keep going on !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Cosmic Beings

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Crimson_D3mon

This is a hidden gem!!! I didn't expect much since it only has 200k reads but it's good

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Adalfarus

Nice book, but please do your research before writing a fanfic!

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Stevano_Veron

This is basicly tensura but the mc is a true dragon from the beginning. This fanfic is solid 7/10. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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