摘要
Growing up in 21st-century England, Richard’s life was ordinary but peaceful. He never imagined that a series of tragedies would drive him to end his life. However, fate had other plans—he was reborn in a magical world, where he became one of the Mages, an elite group of individuals blessed with supernatural powers. Thrust into a realm filled with monstrous beasts and dangerous mages, Richard must fight to survive in a deadly battle for his life. Join him on his journey from a helpless infant to the mighty Thunder God.
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Just supporting the writer to write more and release more chapters daily. Writer could focus more on Manchester or UK. Seem he was on hurry to kill the MC and throw him into his magic world [img=coins]
I think it's a good start. Writing quality can be improved. Writer should post more daily chapters instead of 2.
This 5* is to encourage author to post more chapters daily. One notification for one chapter is not worth my time. Please consider. Thank you.
Dear author, please publish more chapters daily. story development seems slow. I want to know overall development faster. Suggestion: update at least 2 chapters daily or a long chapter.
Story is slow paced. One chapter daily is not acceptable. Even chapter is not that long. I love the storyline. Requesting the author to publish more or longer chapters. Thank you.
Dear author, please release more chapters daily. It's kinda slow and waiting doesn't feel good. Free chapter would be nice gift for my power stone.
Just supporting the writer to write more and release more chapters daily. [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
I lived in Failsworth for some time. MC is like my hometown hero :)[img=Loving it] [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it] Please publish chapters regularly.
Though it's just getting started, this new novel shows a lot of promise to me. The world-building is intriguing, with hints of a rich, magical world and mysterious forces at play. The protagonist is relatable, and there’s potential for some great character development as the story progresses. The plot is off to a strong start, with enough action and suspense to keep you interested. The writing is clear and engaging, and the pacing feels just right for a beginning. I’m excited to see where this story goes.... it has all the makings of an epic fantasy adventure! Definitely one to watch. Giving all-stars to encourage the writer.
Can you Mass Release? There is an event going on. It may have some benefits for authors.
Dear author, I want mass release. I'll give you 5* and power stone everyday. I want MC grow up quickly.
Thank you. Please publish more chapters. Your story development is somewhat slow....
The writer is supporting his own work [img=Loving it]. If any readers have any questions, I’m available to help. You can DM me or leave a comment about your likes or dislikes.