摘要
Love is something that you receive whether you like it or not. Rejection can never make it stop. When Wolde Samuel stumbled into Tsegereda’s world, might as well into a trap, love was established. Them being from different places and their rulers seem to be in a glaring competition or the fact that Tsegereda is currently engaged doesn’t seem to help at all. Will they get what they want? Will they finally have their peace?
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Really love the premise. The world building is really thought out and carefully done. The grammar is good, so I did not have to waste braincells trying to understand what author is saying. Great job Author!
I would say the author is raw potential. They need to do more work to make their narrative smoother, which, at the moment is largely chunky and rigid. The grammar is slightly inconsistent in places. They are inexperienced when using a variety of different terminology, and should be wary when overloading the reader with too much detail, expecially names.
The plot of this story is really good and I will keep reading it and I have also added it to my Library! I really hope the author doesn't stop writing! Good work
Quite an interesting plot and so far the book is great. The writing style and dialogue are on point and well written. The characters are well portrayed and the story is medium-paced. Highly recommended!!! Keep up the good work, author!!
Yeahhhh... i know i am reviewing my own freakin book:) anyways what i want to say is... if you really like this book, if you REALLY like it then please add it to you library. Anyways thanks for checking it out:)