/ Eastern / The Tales Of Divine Sun Dragon
摘要
Sun and Moon continent is know as a cultivation world,here strength is matter more!Its where the strong eat the weak!
In the Sun and Moon continent is also where our mc,Xiao Long was born.Xiao Long is the Young master of the Xiao Clan who was born with special ability and a great fate waiting for him.
Xiao Long also was born on a great day and at the moment he was born, the Sun and Moon world fall into silent,powerful martial artist,godly beast and other living beings faint except several peoples and one of them will be a great help to Xiao Long!
50 Golden Tickets=1 Bonus Chapter
500 Power Stones=1 Bonus Chapter
100 Coins=1 Bonus Chapter
500 Coins=2 Bonus Chapters
*Each chapters contain around 1100 words ~ 3000 words
*Warning:In the early chapters, there are a lot of grammars mistakes but as the chapter progress, the grammars will become better.
..........
(The DP is not mine so if the owner want me to take it off,please tell me)
(Hey guys this is my first novel! I actually a great fan to a Xianxia,Xuanhua and Wuxia novel and because of that,I tried to make my own novel after reading a lot of books and fanfic and this is the result:)
In this novel I got a lot of ideas from other Xianxia and Xuanhua novels so there will be a little similarities with other novels that you have read.
My mc also will have his own lucky chance since his birth but the things he got will grow stronger with him and thats mean, my mc will not be op from the start.
My mc will only have one or two girls and there also will have a dual cultivate scene and one more thing that i want to said is, english is not my native language so don't be mad if you found some or a lot of wrong verbs in my novel.)
標籤
-- 收到的禮物 
-- 推薦票
榜單 
-- 推薦票 你也許也喜歡
17評論
3.96
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
quite the interesting book to read🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
I am not sure I can say much good about this book. Writing English novels is not a good plan for you. The characters are bland and generic. It is not interesting.
Please fix the grammar it makes it hard to read other than that I enjoy the story a lot keep up the good work and I hope you continue to update
Gotta say this book is amazing, I love it great job Author keep it up love the amazing work , The characters are amazing good plot too .keep it up!!
I like the story (I have read 130+ chapters) but there are two things that I don’t like and those are the long and unnecessary descriptions and the grammar. But at least the grammer is nothing major (at least the author does not confuse he and her pronouns). If minor grammar mistakes and long descriptions don’t bother you then you should give the story a try.
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I love the story because from world background to character design even story development everything is unique author create everything himself that why I like this story
I read quite a few chapters and the world building is good. No info dump, everything is explained with the story progress. I like novel where the MC has powerful cheats and grows faster. But I personally am not into the novels with alchemy so this novel is not for me. The grammar is little bit bbad. Iam not a native English speaker so that doesn't concern me. So if you like all these things the novel is great.
The most basic use of English. If I were to give an estimate, the author’s at best 5th grade English level. This is just a washed down version of every cultivation novel ever. Fight scenes are pathetically written idk why the 9 other ppl even said the book is good. Prob cos it’s the authors alt
Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
Keep up the good work, hope you can carry this novel till the end. Grammar a bit wishy-washy, here and there but everything thing else is great.
This book is really amazing! Its have been so long since I read a true Xianxia story and I can said that this novel have not disappointed me yet.The author make his mc grow slowly and with hard work even though he make his mc born with a strong bloodline and physique. Other than that, this book also have a concept element.For example the mc who used spear as his weapon have comprehend a Spear Concept! I just want to said that if anyone would like to read a Xianxia Story, I really recommend this book to you all.This book own a good character growth, steady update and long chapter.
I didn’t read it and unfortunately I don’t think i will when literally the first two sentences in the synopsis are like this.
i have to say i like the story itself but author you are focusing too much on filling chapters an entire just descriping the characters after about 2 to 5 chpaters i amnot saying it is a bad thing but too many times is annoying as of now i read about 70 chapters that could be written in 50 or less even on good way what's more almost every chapter when you make a change on the scene or switching between two scene you must start as an unknown figure then identifies it man that's honostly too much that's making it annoying too much annoying . the grammers i rarely see a section with a good grammer almost every chapter is written badly pls revise them and thanks
In conjunction with the thirtieth chapter, I have decided to write my own review and I as the author of this novel, of course I need to give it Five stars :) First, I want to said that as a new writer, I am really proud of my novel.Even though my English language is not really good, this book own the best of me. Second,I am a fan of wuxia, xianxia and the rest of Chinese fantasy novels and because of that, I have decide to write my own novel. Now, let's talk about the novel. Just like others wuxia or xianxia novel, my novel also will own young masters and face slapping but.....my novel will be a little different compare to others Xianxia and Wuxia novel because this novel won't have any harem and the main character of my novel also will be a coldblooded person who won't care about anyone else and will killed them if they harm his family. My MC also only have one bloodline and one special physique,not like other mc in Xianxia and Wuxia novel who own a lot of bloodlines and special physiques. Other than that, my mc also will use spear as his main weapon and maybe in the future he will have a second weapon as his secondary weapons but.. .who knows? If you want to know more about this novel, keep reading! I also really appreciate if there are some readers who comments and vote my novel:)
I have to say that reading this brought a lot of nostalgia. It was only a few years ago that I've seen a the original charm of wuxia, xanxia, and all that. This is a throwback novel against all the system, sign-in, and overpowered stuff that is hip nowadays. It is funny that the nostalgia doesn't stop there. For people who read Machine Translations, this brings that vibe as there is still a lot of work that needs to be done with wording and all that. Spacing work needs a lot of polishing as well. I trust the author would improve on that and I could only advice to use Grammarly if he could.