摘要
Aiden Nightshade grew up learning how to become the best assassin in the world. His deadly skills earned him the title "Reaper". However, one day, death came knocking unexpectedly... but the universe wasn't done with him.
"Wait, how am I alive?" Aiden muttered, opening his eyes once again.
"People here can fly? They can even shoot fireballs? Just what is this place?"
Wondering how he could obtain such powers, he learned about the Otherworld—a place where he would have to complete trials in different worlds to get stronger. Then, a message appeared in front of him.
[You will be summoned to the Otherworld in five seconds.]
[5...4...3...2...1]
[Summoning...]
標籤
-- 收到的禮物 
-- 推薦票
榜單 
-- 推薦票 你也許也喜歡
35評論
4.47
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
I really like the creativity of this novel. I enjoy reading the different trails and the thought that went into every detail. But, I wish that the author would make a better effort to clean up and polish his work so that what they have imagined is clearly conveyed through the effective use of Grammer and vocabulary. This is my personal opinion, but maybe the author should focus on the advancement of the story, rather than spending 2 to 3 chapters explaining intimate nights. I just feel that the mature scenes don't need that much detail, and maybe you could shorten it down so that we can get back into the story and enjoy the book. There are more ways to show romance than in the bedroom. Other than that, great detail and good luck on the future chapters.
Sometimes I can't tell if this novel wants to be more adult oriented, dark or pure action. This isn't a bad thing per say. after going through 169 chapters I have to say it's quite an enjoyable novel. The title, did throw me off a bit but I enjoy what it tries to do.Our MC The Reaper is pretty much above average. Yeah he seems overpowered at first until he gets smacked with reality that he's just a small fish in a bigger pond. That realization was okay. At some point I was even looking forward more to the adult scenes than the trials. Why? Besides it felt like the MC was actually becoming more human. As weird as it sounds the MC is basically more brawn than brain in his skill area. He isn't exactly smart at social situations which is quite infuriating in the beginning. Heck I'm here still hoping he gets with Emma (the main heroine I'm guessing and his future babe) and stops acting like a emo child. But I get it he's stressed. Funny enough even without the adult scenes this novel would be pretty well even if it wasn't Included. Gotta admit it's a 8/10 for Enjoyment. Would recommend it to people who like those small adult scenes, talented MCs but aren't overpowered and assassins.
It’s interesting and thr plot is intriguing... I wish I can get more chapters asap... Please keep updating, author [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Wow! bro what a story. Mostly perfect grammar and I love the way you write, the build up to the story. It's beautifully paced, making for totally an immersive reading. There are however a few errors of note. In your synopsis you mentioned, " ...the universe was not done with him and made him awaken in another world. You could have said instead, "...brought him back in another world. On to the chapter I you state that Aiden was perplexed by 'the lack of support from the police'. Regardless of how vicious or how much of a menace to society his victim was, the police will just consider anyone who kills this rotten apple as a criminal and not as a saviour. That's standard police rational, it's just black and white in their reasoning there are no grey areas. In that regard you might want to say instead, that Aiden was perplexed by the lack of impartiality by the police, as they had already convinced themselves that he was guilty of the crime without bothering to give him the benefit of the doubt. Otherwise... excellent writing bro. Keep up the very high standard.
Really good story. Felt like it was sped up towards the end and could have ended a little better, but overall great characters and good storytelling.
it's amazing really. This is like a totally new type of reincarnation novel, not the ones that are common and so on. Grammer is spot on, I could almost enjoy those words. it was very well written and looking forward for more! good luck and keep writing 😊
Hello author! I'm interested in starting to read the novel, but first I would like you to ask me a few questions, please, my questions are as follows: who are the members of the MC's harem (if you can please say their names) and if there will be ntr (I hope not)... please answer me
Everything else is quite good, but I just hate Aiden's attitude, I understand why he's like that, but it's a bit much a bit unbearable to read
So far I have reached chapter 150 and this far my only complaint - which still is annoying is for the worlds strongest assassin - he is very indecisive … surely that should spell death as an assassin especially when it comes to romance - I hope this gets sorted as it’s only part of the story that is really lacking … why can’t we have an mc that is a boss
The novel is very good, what I liked most was the writer's ingenuity in the description, so that you find yourself immersed in reading without realizing it،
The story is interesting and if it weren’t for the simplistic female characters I’d keep reading. Why are they behaving more like a litter of jealous puppies than individual humans? It’s pretty common in this platform, but is it necessary? I do really like the story - very interesting considering the genre!
this is one the most amazing books I have read in here,i love the MC he isn't brain dead and actually acts like a normal human being if he had the same skills and the characters don't feel obnoxious at all( i have read the first 30 chapters so far), will update yall with how i think about this as time goes.
Thanks for the chapter update. An isekai character to another world, killed by his own professor, seems good. Actually i just read you first chapter and due to several books that I have read, isekai is already a part of it. Im looking forward into your world building. Good luck..
This is an excellent piece of work with distinctive characters, clear background. The way how the writer described everything from characters, and environments to actions and emotions makes the story feels real. The paragraph arrangement is very neat and easy to understand. Overall, it's good.
I thought this story would be an ordinary reincarnation story. But, oh boy, I was immediately presented with a reincarnation+tower-like system when I kept reading the next chapter. The author provides enough suspense in this story. I just wish he didn't let this annoying woman stay with him as the story progresses.
Okay, this is basically the first ML story based on reincarnation and system that I have read. And I'm tied to it with full interest. Looking forward to your updates Author. Your grammars are perfect, and you kept me hooked, I was intrigued at first because of the mafia-like beginning... But now this wants to keep me going. Thank you for creating this masterpiece. This is the ML book I've read that kept me hooked, I like the way you started the first chapter. Thank you once again.
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous]
Hello all, author here. Here are some things you need to know about me and this novel! 1)To start, this is my first time writing a novel which means that I might make some mistakes here and there, which is normal because I am a human. 2)This novel will be at least 1000 chapters long I have some plans for it which I will not reveal as of right now. I hope you will at least try to read the first few chapters of this novel to decide whether it is for you or not. 3)I am still thinking about whether or not there will be a harem in my story, but if there is one. I assure you that it will not be forced and will not ruin the story. 4)As I am a new author, my writing skills and my writing experience will grow as I write this book and I am excited about this journey, 5)If you find errors in this book, please point them out so that I can modify them as soon as possible. 6)Lastly, I hope you will enjoy reading this novel since I am writing to share this story with every one of y'all and put a smile on your faces!