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After dying from betrayal, Thomas reincarnates as Jolthar Kaelzhar, the neglected son of a powerful clan, just after his brothers kill him. With Jolthar's memories and the blessing of Qalena, Thomas vows to rise from his lowly position and claim power in his new life.
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Sword freak, just my kind of trope and family seems interesting and looking forward to more
gods and demi gods, interesting stuff and i can see its heavy on emotional side too.
A novel belonging in the fantasy category completely, this is due to the inconsistent knowledge used by the MC and the random resources generated with it. An example is to obtain clay the MC mixes soil with water which is possible to do, but then uses the clay to create an oven or maybe it was a forge 3x the size of the last one he had at the family keep without a time skip or any real explanation how it was established within a short period. The world background might have been stated at some point in the future of the story I just never got to it. MC is never given any details or anyone for that matter besides relation to MC. The story has no driving factor for the MC. It seemed the MC died at the start of the story could only assume heart attack or stoke maybe due to trauma, but arrives in new world with no signs of that happened. In addition sentece structuring is questionable at best and might need a rewrite (this is coming from me, which struggles with English too).
Hi everyone, I have created a new story exploring the realm of gods and mortals. I hope you will enjoy it, and I welcome your suggestions and reviews.