/ Anime & Comics / The Sin of Envy in Tensura
摘要
Leviathan, Lord of Envy has no current user and its abilities are unknown ?
What a better skill for our envious mc.
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He is jalous but not sickly jealous, will do anything to protect his loved ones.
He can copy skill and do multiversal travel, you know where it's going.
Maybe jalous but not selfish.
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Just for fun, I have no writing skills and have never wrote anything so don't expect too much. I hope you will still like it. I'm not a native english speaker.
I don't own any character except for the OC and skills I guess.
The cover is mine, I did it using IA.
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really liking this so far, would've given 5 stars but I'm unsure about the updating Stability so I shall refrain from now. should this be proven to be daily or even every other day I'll update this to a full 5*
you do know Envy is a unique skill of Velzard right? no two people can have the same skill, it's the reason why Yuuki went after Mariabell Rosso because he knows that he will gain Greed when Mariabell dies
a good idea for a fanfic. The writing is good, but I hope you don't make the MC in charge of the monster country and make rimiru the one in charge so the mc can travel.