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I'm Dropping This Guys, I realized I made the pacing very bad, and I believe that this should be a better piecewiht a better writing. I'm going to rewrite it together with the novel the king of Tricks and Magic later on. Sorry for disappointing you guys.
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A very interesting premise of someone with three livess. So recommendedd let's goo more chapters a day pleaseee!!! Come on let's gooo!! Ray Lance the black general!!!
This one's very interesting indeed!! It's like I'm watching a combination of my teenage comedy SNAFU, nurarihyon, and Noragami all into one single novel!!! Please update more pleaseeee
MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE! MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE! MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE! MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE! MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE! MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE! MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!
LET'S GOO THIS IS GOOD!! LET'S GOO THIS IS GOOD!! LET'S GOO THIS IS GOOD!! LET'S GOO THIS IS GOOD!! LET'S GOO THIS IS GOOD!! LET'S GOO THIS IS GOOD!! LET'S GOO THIS IS GOOD!!
IT GET PREMIUM TOO FAST! You should have made the premium more slower. It was getting more interesting later on, and you should have made premium there. That's all for me, overall VERY PROMISING
This is an interesting and captivating blend of slice of life with the spices of Yokai and demons, Reincarnation, Modern Wizard Society, Detectives Mystery, and Highschool Romance! I would really like if the writing style got more neat and easy to follow, but overall, I'm very interested.
KEEP IT UP PLEASE!!! KEEP IT UP PLEASE!!! KEEP IT UP PLEASE!!! KEEP IT UP PLEASE!!! KEEP IT UP PLEASE!!! KEEP IT UP PLEASE!!! KEEP IT UP PLEASE!!! KEEP IT UP PLEASE!!! KEEP IT UP PLEASE!!!
Gotta love the Yokai stuff things. It's much more interesting than just normal troupes, I love how it has the theme of a slice of life to give a picture of the adapting life of him in the modern love
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THIS IS GREAT! THIS IS GREAT! THIS IS GREAT! THIS IS GREAT! THIS IS GREAT! THIS IS GREAT! THIS IS GREAT! THIS IS GREAT! THIS IS GREAT! THIS IS GREAT! THIS IS GREAT!
A very potential one indeed, but I"m slightly confused with your writing, and it went premium real fast! But I still love it lol X) Please continue it, it seems like a beautiful piece
Stop lying 🤥 how is he a loner when he has a harem of “girlfriends” cliche template?, Has slaves and a boss?
Might want to pace the things up a little it. but the premise is promising, and the characters are interesting and very alive. But it could be improved. I'm going to read this thoroughly for now. Good luck, author
Go on!! INto the nex one~~~ Well I'm not usually a fan of a highschool story, but this seems to be very promising! But it seems that this is going to be quite heavy
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Got a huge potential, but reeks of Japanese light novel's reference here. Hope there are less cliches inside it since it's kind of annoying, but still, I'm cheering you!
Now this is an interesting one. we need more novels with the kinds of these more lately with the overnumbered novels of systems and other normall overrated stuff