/ Sci-fi / The Search for Xanar
摘要
After the Death of his Favourite Author, Castor Grimes Jnr and his Sister Cece travel the Multiverse, In Search of one where both their dreams have come to pass.
Castor wishes to finish his Favourite Book series and Cece wishes to undo her greatest mistake!
With their trusty dimension crosser, Veil Splitter, the two transverse the multiverse in hopes of fulfilling their desires.
Minions, Mayhem and Misadventures yet to come, how will the two siblings survive the Onslaught thrown their way?
Come find out! Join them on their quest, they need all the help they can get!
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-- 推薦票
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寫檢討
Author of this book, shameless review here however I've gotta do it regardless! it's a slowburn story but I promise it's worth the read! it's a fantastical adventure with mystery and Intrigue, you'll love it.
This story has immense potential, writing wise it is very good. Pacing is kind of off sometimes and either needs to slow down in some cases, or is just going too fast. These are just minor things that the author can get better at quickly. As for update stability I cant say much yet as there are only 4 chaps. Worldbuilding is solid along with character design. Cheers!