/ Horror / The sacrifice
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The Millers move back to their old family house after a long time. Unexplainable events starts to occur as they begin their new life there.
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This is a review of the first chapter. The story starts with a family of four moving back to the father’s home town. The two siblings are a girl who likes “creepy” things and a boy who did not want to leave his friends back at their former residence. Which sibling will be the main character is unknown. There is also flash forward will an ***** male running away in the dark. The story is well written, but one chapter is not long enough to determine if it will be scary.