/ Eastern / THE RISE OF BHATTI DYNASTY
摘要
Vikramaditya is child who was raised by his parents with utmost care and affection in secluded place in mountains. By nature he was a impassioned person for adventures and new things, as he is not contented with the little place where he lives and imagines for the new places to visit. as he eventually learnt about new things, he urged his parents for let him go for the adventures, as they are not able stop him, they let him know about the outside world and taught him basic life saving skills along with his eight friends. after learning some skills viki and his friends moved towards the outside world as he don't know that his movement towards the outside world will bring the corrupted world into the lights righteousness. what opportunities and dangers are waiting for him to experience and what is the reason for his parents to rise him in the secluded place.
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5 stars for being unique in terms of using the Indian cultural settings which is rich in culture and history, instead of the usual xianxia/wuxia in eastern fantasy.
hello people, author is here. I am not thick skinned enough to give myself the 5/5 rating. so leaving the rating stuff aside, let me talk about my story. As english is my native language you find grammatical errors here and there, please bear with this for sometime and I will correct them in the near future. now let me talk about the stability of the updates, up till now I have to admit that I didn't released the chapters consistently, but it will not be the same from now onwards and you expect more stability from myself. that is why i rate myself with 3 stars. when it comes to story development, character design and world building I have a clear idea and I do feel like I am doing a great job and if you feel like anything is out of place and please to comment under this review. if want any updates regarding the story please do comment here. I hope I get more reviews for the story, so that I can know it is reaching to many people. hope to see more reviews. signing of Great_demon_god
other than the update stability and few minor grammatical errors, everything is fine. give it a try