摘要
The day she died was the day she finally realized that her detachment and cowardice were her biggest mistakes. That those were the reasons she lost everything.
"If time will turn back its hands, I will no longer just watch. I will return everything in its rightful places. I will control my own fate."
These were her thoughts as the reel of her life played, as the poison coursed in her body reminding her of her incompetence, of her inaction, burning all of her resistance and detachment.
And then she opened her eyes once more.
She was back.
This time she will make sure that she won't lose anything or anyone. Including a certain smiling devil who is really good at kissing.
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This is an Original story and not a translation. All rights reserved. :)
Disclaimer: The image in my cover is not mine. Just got it from Pinterest. Credits to the source.
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Everything this novel offers to its readers is best. But I would like to add that please stabilize the updates of story. Readers need more updates. If author can be more magnanimous, you can give us mass release too...hehe. But jokes aside please update novel regularly.
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Hahahaha I am loving this novel. MORE MORE it's sooo good. I wish it had 1,000 chapters. Please please .................................. ............................................................
"Qing Shan knew that she was supposed to hate Zi Jue for all that he did to her in her past life. It was something that people deemed as abuse. However, there was one fact that was only known to her. Zi Jue, in the beginning did every single caring thing, every type of doting one could give to another person. He did it for her. However, Qing Shan paid no heed. It takes two people to tango. It was Qing Shan, herself, who drove Zi Jue to that whirlpool of madness. And it sent both of them to hell. " sigh. I can't read this book. No it's not okay to kidnap somebody. So what if you didn't like him? Her abuse was not her fault. Some things are never ok. Authors should know better. Can we get ride off abusive MCs?
Nice concept rather than a cold CEO irs a lady devil who is dominating a male lead...... No wonder the story line is to different from .... I am waiting for their romance ......
Love it 🥰 Can’t help how it coming along and looking to each chapter each time. I like how it go with the flow and doesn’t drag on too long on it
Okay, this is Just my personal opinion but.. I really don’t like the fact that the female lead thought that just because he pampered her to the ends of the earth, it would be fine if he hit her. Abuse is abuse. And the fact that the author tried to salvage it by making the male lead be all like, “I was taught to be gentle to my family but I can’t believe I laid my hands on my wofe whom I consider my family.” Yeah, no. No, no, no, no, no. You knew you did wrong, but I still can’t believe this. She had bruises and she was all, “He loves me and dotes on me, I have all limited edition shoes and clothes. I just really pissed him off this one time.” Like, no. Also, there was this one reader who said, “The author is just trying to break away from cliches.” Since when have not adding abuse in novels become a cliche? In fact, I think there are too many abuse and rape in novels. I have only ever encountered few novels where there was no one who had been abused or raped. I really tried to continue reading, but I just couldn’t handle the fact that she was fine with him hitting her for trying to escape because she was being held captive agaisnt her own will. But I couldn’t continue. When I read the synopsis, I really thought it would be a good book, but it truly disappointed me. HOWEVER, IF YOU ARE FINE WITH THIS KIND OF PLOT, THEN PLEASE FEEL FREE TO READ. THIS IS JUST BASED ON MY PERSONAL OPINION AND YOU ARE NOT OBLIGATED TO HAVE THE SAME OPINION.
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When I first read this, my first thought is about Ye Wanwan and Si Ye Han,, it gives me that vibes but going further it's kind of different, a bit I mean. For the male lead here even if he's possessive, his personality is different from SYH. But the story here until 40 sth chapters still give me the PMSL, the media faculty thing, the different is the step mother and stepsister.. it's a good novel anyway, keep it up.
She is very good, I love it and she has me attached to her for months 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍. the bad thing is that there are not many updates and I have to wait to read new chapters😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
I love it, the excitement the thrill... Worth reading. I love the female lead she's strong and know what she wants granted she had to die first to notice and the male lead is amazing but we the readers needs to know more about him. How the author came up with such an amazing story is beyond me cause most stories on here the fl end up weak and made too much mistake. I hope for more updates and see how far this book would go.
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Story seems incomplete. Doesn't hold onto you or make you feel you want more. Charachter development needs to be worked on. Wonder when she had all access she did not utilise
Hello author ! What happened ? Why aren't you updating ? We are dying of waiting . Please update faster. And this time you have to compensate us with a mass release for making us wait for so long. Please author. Don't kill us innocent souls from waiting too much. Love you.
Author please update the story, I'm still waiting to see what is going to happen with the FL and ML...Ansious here...Hope that the FL show stronger that when she died and reborn again Waiting for updates
Tis is a good read! The first few chapters I was a little worried because oh the implied problematic relationship between the couple but ahhh darn they really redeem themselves as the chapter progressed! Im not ashamed to say that this two are really cute couple! I might have squealed a few times by how adorable and teasing they are. My biggest problem is it's been months and the writer still doesnt update, I know people have their own lives to live and I thank the author for creating this fic but it's a little disappointing.
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Hello author! Are you ever planning on coming back and finish the book or at least to let us know that you're stopping this book??? It'll be sad if you did on planning to end it. Please do let us reader know. Please!!!
I just love this story so much! The characters and the romance mixed with an underworld twist love it! Please update and come back quickly it can't end on a cliffhanger like this!!!!
To interesting love the plot and storyline. Looking forward to its progression even more. As I read on the more I am looking forward to the upcoming chapters
This is what happened in the first 5 chapter, so no major spoiler. To put it simply, this makes a mockery of women that detach themselves in situations of abuse where there is no way out. Detachment is a way of coping. She gets abused for not being okay with being kidnapped and denied her freedom and general liberties. She dies being detached all her life and suddenly she has all these plans and energy to do stuff when reincarnated... something completely out of character for someone that has always been passive. Change is hard. You can’t go 0 to 100 and say it’s because she rebirthed. So, character development is meh, especially since there is the victim blaming. The “it takes two to tango” bull where she justifies her captor. The idiom is not applicable as she is only in a situation where her response to a forced situation illicits favorable or abusive reactions. This is like how you discipline a farm animal. You have all control and manipulate and play with it for your satisfaction. It’s not a situation where two people are doing the “tango.” I hate to pit it this way, but while someone like her might have regrets, that does not mean she would want to relieve her life more than be dead. Passiveness comes from unwillingness to adapt and move on, it comes from general lack of motivation in life. Someone like her was basically clinically depressed and magically becomes an active teenager that wants to be up in everybody’s business along with her own. This is HARD fiction. It lacks reason and logic and is in the same space as fanfic, where you really have to struggle to make it seem plausible.
Jinxed my last review. I'm so sorry. I'm accepting all your razors. 🥲 Real life happened but I'm not gonna overshare the details. Might jinx it again. Well, I'm not dead. Yet. 🙂 Expect an update. Soonish. Might do a bit of revising here and there. Love y'all. Thanks for still being here.