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After an intense battle against the Republic, General Grievous and his army are forced to land onto a planet called Remnant.
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Chapters are 500 words or less.. The English isn't all that great, the formating and editing is also lackluster. Maybe Author should focus on spending more time on each chapters and making them longer and better.
Normally I would point out the obvious grammar mistakes and plot holes in the story and some of the stuff that just doesn’t make sense but this is clearly made for fun and to enjoy a light hearted story. And it does exactly that.
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