/ Anime & Comics / The Ravager in danmachi
摘要
A young megalomaniac king gets invaded by an ancient threat and is forced to take a gamble and jump into the unknown land of magic and gods.
In a new world, he wonders if he can get strong enough to fight back aganist his ancient enemy.
Disclaimer: This is a fanfic of 'Wake of the ravager' and 'DanMachi' i do not own any of these or their characters.
I recomend to read ' Wake of the ravager' to get a better understanding of the story, although its not mandatory.
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Well, the writing quality was pretty bad at first but it is improving. I guess it went from extremely bad --> just a little bad but bearable. I can't really say much about stability of updates cuz it's not even stable in the first place. Story development is fine. The start was really confusing and combined with the bad writing and grammar, most readers would probably drop the novel. The plot was also quite interesting. Not a bad novel for a read but I suggest that the author rewrites the early chapters if possible
Why no one is reading yhus ff this is a good one at top of that. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
the beginning of the novel can be a bit confusing not going to lie. if you look past that the story is good and it follows the plot line of the anime. the only thing I wish is that the side characters got more involved with MC and that the mc and the Loki Familia got more involved with the MC to. and the best thing about the novel is that the main character isn't close to Lily.
I found it very good, strong protagonist but not so much, with a very good evolution, and it is not shy or dense, in fact I like ff by danmachi
descent story and not gutta catch em all with massive harem. looks like there will be three girls in his harem learner(fem of himself) and the two dead girls he can revive later
The writting has a few errors like the spelling of through and my but overall pretty good did such a low rating as author stopped 29 days ago hope they can continue is starting to get interesting will keep this tabbed incase they change their mind.
the story started out a little confusing but does start to make sense after the first couple chapters though I personally have issues with the author purposefully wasting the mcs potential while acknowledging it in chapter 15 author had mc level up when his stats weren't maxed and so is wasting the mcs potential I wouldn't have let the mc lvl up personally till he maxed his stats to allow for maximum growth but the author only allowed strength to be SS rank and the rest be mediocre look at ch 15 I liked the story until this point because it had potential and now I don't feel like continuing because if author will squander the potential of a mc who's to say they will care about the story in general