摘要
The world is crumbling.
The sun, our source of light and life, continues to shine, but danger threatens the moon, our bulwark against the evil that seeks to end it all.
Even as the sun provides us with light and magic and energy for life to grow and thrive, life must let this power flow through us and return to the moon where it will complete its work. But what happens when this lunar flow is threatened?
Five princesses, each named for the defender of the night, forge their own connections to the power of the moon after discovering that their place in the cycle of life has been disrupted.
Legend speaks of what must be done to correct the balance; does prophecy name them as the ones to save the world from the destruction that lies in wait past the veil of the night?
[Author's Note: I have set the warning level for this story to Parents Strongly Cautioned due to some potentially sensitive content that was required by the setting and story. I have put Notes at the beginning of the chapter prompting this decision, and will do so again should this issue arise again. The rest of the chapters should otherwise be mostly benign, but please feel free to let me know if there is anything I have missed.]
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Only one word: AMAZING. This novel needs to be advertised more as it is different from the others. The way the author created this and the world-building is on par with the novels that are being released in paperback. Please keep on writing and I cant wait for the new chapters to come
The Lore, oh the lore! I love a good novel with lore <3 A fascinating world to find myself in, I utterly adore the mischief of the MC's. Kinda confusing at first, following the five princesses' but once you memorise the names it all comes together nicely. Grammar is great and sentences are fluid, it's easy to watch it play out in my head as I read. Highly recommend reading if you're into fantasy, action and lore <3
I have been following this book since the beginning and I must say this book deserves so much more love than it's getting right now. The story is intriguing and the characters are unique in terms of their appearance and characteristics. What I love most is the writing style of the author. Everything flows so smoothly from his pen and it's absolutely pleasing to the senses. A highly recommended book.
My two main critiques are story development and character design. The themes and overall plot seems interesting enough but I didn't feel any hooks. The first chapter started off strong with two many details of the world. There was so much info dumping and very little character design. I get you're trying to explain the world, elementals and other stuff but too much information in one place only makes the story boring. Add things that would make me want to read the next chapter. I got bored and skipped a bit so I could get to the good parts. The writing quality is great and although the world background could use more work as much of it was confusing, it was good. The synopsis could be worked on. There's a lot of history and ideas but I wasn't feeling it. It didn't propel me to expect a masterpiece. Overall, focus more on engaging the audience and make them wanna keep turning pages. The story idea is good but the development wasn't. The MC seems very smart, you captured that perfectly with the first chapter but most of her reactions are vague. Help the readers the be able to get into her head by explaining why she chooses to think a certain way and then those the opposite.