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THE PRIMORDIAL CHAOS SYSTEM

Fantasy 16 章節 227.3K 流覽
作者: Aditya_Raj_0823

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this is my first time a novel.
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From the End of Primal Chaos, A unknown fragment of Chaos possessing no element or attributes remained in the vast Universe waited for the kind, good-hearted, innocent, and pure soul.

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Asura_Rage

bro I am really happy and proud you, my name is anuj you can call me asura and by my name you must have figured out that I am an Indian .I don't know but I think that you must have gotten this story idea from anime or manga or the time I got reincarnated as a slime anime, and I really really liked the storyline your presentation of the story is also good this was my first novel I was scrolling through the google for an cultivation system and I found your novel I instantly loved it hope you conti your uploads

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gee_ringdomstories

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Apocalyptic_Nimbus

(sorry for my bad English) This is the first novel that I have ever read and it is the exact same novel that inspired me to read more novels! Although the author didn't explain much detail regarding specific stuff... I really really enjoyed reading this. The freedom and power that the author gives to the Main Character are just so beyond my imagination (I sometimes imagine creating a character that can control the universe instead of a character that created the universe and the omniverse so this is new content for me). I wish you would upload more chapters! And as a new novel reader, I enjoy reading simple and entertaining stories than complicated ones (tried reading top-ranked novels but my smol and impatient brain sometimes can't comprehend some of the stuff). Thank you and I will always remember you as the first novel that I have ever read (after running out of man/gas/whas/huas to read). Although my support may be small and worthless, I hope this can encourage you to continue writing more chapters. Keep Up The Good Work! <3

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