摘要
On that day, Bartolomeo could see everything in the execution grounds...
The man who had one day betrayed his own kingdom was getting executed and so the gallant prince would lead the empire...
After years of suffering, the prince of a now fallen kingdom came back and released the people from the hands of the evil Kristnoev empire. Taking back his rightful lands, imprisoning the traitors of his former kingdom and conquering the wretched empire!
His tale would certainly be passed to generations forever being remembered...
It was just like a folk tale, the story was a beautiful yet simple one.
There was just one problem in this story...
Bartolomeo was the one getting executed.
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The story was great overall. Good job! I love how you show each character's personality. The way you show the situation made it easier to understand. I love it!
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Hehe you did great in there author! It was nice reading 4 chapter already ... hope you'd make more progress and I'm gonna review again after I'm done readingreading and understanding the whole story.❤
It's me the author! Shamelessly supporting his own work~ As it's only the start of the novel, I don't have much to say. And the only thing I can really say is that I hope you enjoy it!!