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摘要
The Four Nations were in a were against The Forbidden, they were a race of beast,with the appearance of a werewolf but these wolves had only one agenda to kill more and to eat more.
As if that was not enough they vomited more and more eggs ,which turned into different beast of different shapes and sizes which further terrorised the humans.
In the midst of four Nations of ability, there was a boy with the name Xander Woods, who didn't have an ability book and therefore was bullied by the others.
One day he left to his regular ability book store to get another ability book, but a middle aged woman gave him two books, and after getting bullied again something happens that changed his life forever
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- 寫作品質
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This book has a lot of potential the grammatical errors alone makes it almost impossible to get pass the first 2 chapters it gets so bad that I can barely even tell when a character is talking, thinking, or if I’m reading a narration of what’s happening.
It's seems the author is getting better and it's just the update that I have a problem I would like him to update more than once every day.
This book has a lot of potential though there has been some grammatical errors, but as I read further the errors lessened so am going to give it 4 stars
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