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One day our Jule Beltra founds a S&M Magazine and when he touched the magazine ir disappeared in the next moment he heared a voice in his head
[Congratulations you are the new host of the perfect sadist system]
"Ahh!!!! What the??”
Follow the story of Jule and watch how he becomes a all powerful being.... and sadistic man
This is my first novel so please write any comments that can help me thank you
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Didn't expect this to be a hidden gem. It's a pretty good story with a unique system. But it's grammatical mistakes doesn't allow usual readers to enjoy it. Only one who have comprehended the "the dao of MTL" and reached a high realm in it like my humble self can enjoy reading this work. . . And ooh yes there are H-scenes....... You can Thank me later.
With the Grammarly online service your second fan will come back and join us...probably. There's something innately satisfying about the unique brand of suffering you've illustrated. Also I've been waiting for this genre of superpowered -philia for a while. Hopefully after 100 chapters you'll start on a masochist system novel.
I’m really enjoying the story so far. I haven’t heard of a sadistic system so far so this is originally for me. I like the take your doing with the story and can’t wait for more. The only bad said for me as a fluent English speaker is that the grammar is pretty bad. As long as the improve upon that or get someone to proof read then it should be all good. Best wishes from a new fan and hope to see the story continue 😊😊👍🏼👏🏼
Nice.Good story.The 1st chapter have some errors.Do your best and thanks for the story. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😆😆😆😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
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This book is amazing. I was dubious when I first saw it, but now I'm convinced. It's funny, interesting and an overall great read. In the beginning there are a few grammar issues, but they aren't atrocious, and the book is still legible and funny. I reccomend this book, and hope anyone who reads it enjoys it!
Just continue this is reallu go goddddddddddffffffffffffffffffff reallyyyyyyyyyyyy gooood yaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy use please dont stop at midway like ither novels i meatb thar really suck i think you cant understand that fucking pain, right?
Chapter 7 : TRANSFORMATION ULQUIORRA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No joke : blem with the orthographe please correct it soon ***************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
Quit while your ahead the dialog in this is horrible. Its like reading a chat log for example, Char A says "..." Char B "...." Add that onto the fact that the entire premisis of the novel is some S&M fans fap fantasy its not worth the loss of brain cells.
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There is some broken English here and there, but because it is good and funny, i think is okay. sadly it has not been updated in a entire year :s
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This novel is really good. I really recommend it even if there are no update. I really hope that the autor restart the novel. +++++++++++++++++++++++
Really like the story some bad grammar but it's fine. Needs to continue with the story. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp.
It is a really good book but I just wish you posted more chaps author, have you given up on this amazing novel? ----------------------------------------------
Hey guys the author here I giving myself an full mark because well everyone does and I don’t want to fall behind the times and to those people that read this lousy novel thank you for not stopping reading my novel even tought my English suck and it really does I meant you just have to read this review to know that