The Overwhelming Path (Dropped)

I think your concept about "system" is amazing. But your concept about "skill" or "ability" is suck dude. Reason : 1. You never give description about ability or skill whose MC got. (Not all readers known animes and systems you are adapted) 2. There is never ever disposable skill or ability. The disposable skill named "scrolls" in fantasy story. And that not in category skill but in category item (disposable item) 3. Why dont make skill have level? And you can upgrade skill level by use poin too. 4. If you want make there are a limit chance used item, you just need skill. And regenerate the chance used every day / week / month / year. Example : Level 1 : chance used : 100x (max : 125) regenerate 1 chance/week Level 2 : chance used : 100x (max : 250) regenerate 1 chance/5 day Level 3 : chance used :100x (max : 500) regenerate 1 chance/3 day Level 4 : chance used : 100x (max : 1000) regenerate 1 chance/day Level 5 (max) : chance used : infinity If you can understand this. Thanks dude. Because i feel a little confusing when read your story. (I only known famous anime)

Good

Unique In It's Own Way! The System Has a Background of its Own Compared to other System Based Novels Where the System Comes out of nowhere this One Actually has its own Mystery! The Character is Slowly being Influenced by the System and his personality starts to Warp. Very Smart and Ingenious Idea!

So... to start with this is a novel by a rather new author, as far as I know. The Story is set in the classical system genre with a very strong MC who is like a monstrous genius to all residents in the new world. Former shut-in and so on, classical bullying, complicated family relations, etc. What makes this novel different is it's approach to the former world. Right now we don't know about any dimensional rifts taking him back home to earth or anything but *SPOILER* the system messes with his memories, his perception of emotions, his very empathie. This is an aspect I have seen previously but never to such an extent. It is cleverly infused into the story and you don't get spammed by it, so no worries about it getting repetive on this part. And as you might have guessed in an OP MC novel there will obviously be some face-smacking. The face slapping is there and fine and not forced. It may seem like a repetition as a lot of novels use it but it is nicely integrated into the story flow which gives it a natural feeling so I don't think its gonna be a reason to drop or don't read the novel. But let's start with the rating: Writing quality = 4* It got 4 stars as you have a new author and he's getting used to it, his effort is there and its not a novel where you have to guess the content. To some 4 will seem like a lot but I'm feeling good today so it'll be 4. Stability of Updates = 5* The updates are on a regular basis, a good amount for a new author and there is no drop in quality. Right now, with the current situation, there is nothing to hate on. This can, of course, change so this is temporary. Story Development = 5* MC with painful school and family background goes to another world with a system and fucks up a few people and cities. Cultivation world, fiance, gender-bender disciple and up to now no sect story ( real one). Sounds middle-class I know but its ok and its certainly worth a read. Character Design = 4* Bullied transmigrated new-body MC with problematic parents(one dead) . Loli fiancee with strong background and kinda in the first stage of yanderism. Weregirl-boy disciple with a weird misconception of about the MC and apparently a massive bust, unproportional to her bodysize. Seems to be important as it has been mentioned. And as of the newest chapter a talking system with personality that manipulates the MC's perception. I imagine him as a dude with a rolled-up on a party sitting on a balcony with a few friends and talking about chilling and smoking. And lastly World Background = 4* Well it's a cultivation world with sects, city lords, empires who are at war, a kinda “the holy crusade against all that is evil“ church stuff, and some discrimination towards demi-humans of all kind Generic but always good for a read. I like it and go on!👏👏👏👍

well i love this.... basically like overpowered!!! but not all the time, well atleast he has some trouble to' And i wish this story to be more popular so the demanding of Chapter well be more hehehe😆😆😆😆 My review this story is interesting... The System is controlling the emotions and thoughts of the MC.... like the system wanted MC to do something fot it.... the system wanted the MC to be dependet on it, so it could use him (for my opinion)... but as the MC grow matured and be more Independent the system is being less active.... well still i love this, but put the MC to much more difficult Challenge atleast even his overpowered it doesn't mean his undefeatable... even his skills are op it doesn't mean his mind are.... and i say one more time. i love this story. continue the hard work🤗🤗🤗 well release more chapters😊😊😊 and expect me to put all my stones in this..🤘👍👍👍👌 and support you but don't drop this story ok...

I gave this novel: Writing Quality 4/5 ~ in comparison to other originals, decent English Stability of Updates 3/5 (unsure how stable the updates are, opted for the middle) Story Development 3/5 ~ I feel I was VERY generous with this score Character Design 2/5 ~ I feel I was quite generous with this score given lack of just about everything regarding characters and their interactions World Background ~ Less generous than with Char. Design with this score as there has been a tiny bit of W.Background, but not memorable This novel is all about mindless, senseless slaughter and... that's about it thus far. No time is spent on character growth. MC is an otaku! When otaku angry, otaku SMASH! Otaku want points! Otaku no forgive! Otaku no mercy! You follow orders and trash my restaurant with mortal weapons? You mortal? Otaku no care! Otaku angry, otaku SMASH! huehuehue xd This is what it feels like to read this novel. The MC gets an invincibility barrier that lasts for 500 hits at chapter 1 and uses it to do stupid **** as if he has never played a game in his life. The system gives him a bunch of op usable items that he uses to completely ignore cultivation levels and otaku angry, otaku SMASH! The MC is an otaku that apparently has no qualms about, quite literally, mindless slaughter and torture. Subjectively speaking I do not like these kinds MC's as they make the novel completely pointless to read. There is no personality to them, no hint of intelligence. The word 'overwhelm' means 'kill everything that offends you' here, regardless of how small the offense seems to be. I do not understand where this is supposed to go as no purpose has been given whatsoever. Just otaku angry, otaku smash. We're done-zo with the fun-zo, otaku angry, otaku smash. You're probably annoyed with reading this already, huh? But you know what? Otaku angry, otaku smash. Objectively speaking, my scoring has been objective as I've not taken into account anything I've said in my rant about this novel. There is no info truly given about the mc - what kind of a person he was before rebirth and how he's changing afterwards. His savage personality is sometimes explained as being influence by the system and sometimes the author just says "...because he's an otaku..." or "...as an otaku...". The allied side characters(females ofc) are completely irrelevant to everything regarding the MC other than being potential **** mates due the nature of the system/MC pairing, nothing can come out of those characters. I honestly that remember if the world itself was every mentioned in the novel - don't even know where the MC is but that might be my fault for not remembering(that's how memorable the setting is with the info we're given). The novel seems to want to thread the path between 'Leveling up and becoming undefeatable' and 'Ultimate scheming system' but it just... otaku angry, otaku smash y'know?