摘要
Roy died during a war against the Evil God Cult, but somehow, he returned back in time to 30 years in the past where he was just a boy who awaken his summoning magic.
Just a few days before his death, he became the only Aura user in a world of magic.
Using his knowledge and experience, he will become an Aura user again, faster than his previous life.
Accompanied with a shape-shifting black slime, he will make sure to protect everyone he cares about and win against the Evil God Cult.
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3.7
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My main problem with this story is the lack of descriptions. I have seen no mentions kn the features of the characters, other then they are pretty or have a good body. That is not descriptive enough. Instead of saying talk about their hair color, height, etc. I do like the idea of the story so far and its interesting. Great job so far, keep up the great work!
the development is too fast and the writing grammer is really bad for someone that has english for their second language and the protagonist acts like a kid when hes supposed too be 30 years old and the reoson why the slime doesnt talk its dumb
We can see the influence of several novels in this story and it still have its own originality, its in fact a good reading. The story is narrated in the point of view of the MC with very unique since I cant remenber any other. The only flaw I have to point is that the author is stingy with the details. If the story take a few lines to describe events like how the magic awakening occur or when he enter an place discribe it briefly the novel will be even better.
I read a few chapters and then I came to know that there will be a prostitute in his harem. And I don't like that idea so I dropped it..........................
All of the characters are very one dimensional. All of the girls fall for the MC a little too easily. The overall concept is interesting and the pacing and plot are pretty good.
Dude I liked the premise and some comedic elements early on, however honestly it became really shitty after trying to implement the harem scenario, try hard style. Like I thought when he went to kill the monster it could be an interesting arc of him on his own, maybe building more of a bond with Vanessa or vallentina whatever the slime is called, but instead you use it to really cringely push the characters together without thinking, hey maybe the two CHILDREN have parents... Anyway for those who enjoy it continue reading, but I'm out
The characters are introduced and devolp in a terrible way. Every explination about his knowledge is basically “magic” and because hes rhe main character. Also the authors Syntax almost gave me an aneurism trying to read his story without speedreading to force my brain to autocorrect the grammer.
i do not like this novel, just being honest, and i just don't want to read it. But it keep giving me it for my free daily reading, and i want it to stop.
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Its terrible, the grammer alone gave me a headache. There isn’t any real explanations either and it’s laden with so much plot armor, Its like the author can’t be helped to come up with a proper start to the story and wants to immediately jump into the middle. it might not be so bad if there where proper translators.
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Esteemed Novel, Please go away from my free reading section. For this I've given you a 5-star review. Thank you for your cooperation. I wish you a million readers.
Skipping a lot of things, no background, not for beginners The grammar is problematic.(have/has and past tense are just the ones i found) .
The author is a very nice and well-mannered person. (I deleted my comment, which was not specific enough, and I corrected the 5 * rating from the author's personality). Overall, I rate creativity as 3 * mainly because of the perspective. The book is written in the first perspective. (a lot of I do this, I do that, I will go there, I feel, I would, I would like) don't like this format.
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Para los amantes del Harem. Las relaciones se mantienen en lo platónico hasta el momento y el Harem crece bastante, lo que me agrada. Punto negativo. También hay que recalcar que se compromete con una prostituta esto por que hay lectores que no les agrada demasiado. Como a mí. Aunque se siente como si el autor pudo evitar esta situación si salvava a la chica de su situación.
This is a very good book, unlike many other book the main charactor doesn't revolve around one thing. The charactor while some what hard to predict will still act like themself.
The story starts off very interesting ,but thats it.the main character is kind of a beta with no spine or control over his own life.its a harem in name only because the women run his life with no actual relations
Shameless review by author here. There are many things than can be improved but I'll give five star to everything since the author is more or less as shameless as the MC here.