摘要
what will you do if you have;
infinite skill point
infinite system point
infinite energy
omni-system shop
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let's follow our protagonist as he got transmigrated to one of his favourite novel and becomes an existence that rules the omniverse with his overpowered and Omnipotent system.
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This is a recreation of my previous Novel the Omnipotent system
Extra Chapters
200 Power Stones - 1 Extra Chapter
500 Power Stones - 2 Extra Chapters
1200 Power Stones - 3 Extra Chapters
20 Golden Tickets - 1 Extra Chapter
100 Golden Tickets - 2 Extra Chapters
500 Golden Tickets - 3 Extra Chapters
Gifts
Cola, Pizza and capsule -- Have a character with the gifter's name.
Massage Chair, Luxury Car and Dragon -- can create a character
Magic Castle, Spacecraft and Golden Gachapon -- all of the above and have their characters revolve around the Mc, can also create a storyline or plot.
This is my discord link, still working on it though
https://discord.com/invite/RyuzMVHR
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17評論
4.35
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This is a good book only if you like really and I say REALLY OP mc from the start, Adam is already broken in the second chapter so if you don't like this kind of stories this isn't for you. There are only 8 chapters so i can't say much about the plot or in wich way it will progres but i'm looking forward to more chpter, good eork author. (ps. sorry for the bad english, not my main leanguage)
Mc is the peak of existence right from the start. Love the fact that he’s originally from Nigeria.
It was all good for the op mc part but as i read on it started to get boring. There is nothing unique about it and i would say the story development could be better. The fight scenes needs improvement. The description of power, skills, realms etc sounds awesome but the utilisation needs work. Well you could give it a try if you want but keep your expectations in check 😆........
Mc is very op which is good and the story is fast which I like too, but there are some chapters that are just full of information and nothing else which I dislike bit, but overall very good and chill to read!
Author, could you please speed up the process? I dont like reading the Remembering The Past Chapters. It felt sad for me. Could you please tell me the synopsis of that chapter ?
Author can you please release chapter from privilege condition? I want to read more
I personally enjoyed it. I love OP characters so this is right up my alley. Even though its a little evident that AI was used. So what? The story is a little good so enjoy it. The only thing I dont like a bit is harem thing but since the story doesnt resolve around the harem its a good read. I stopped purchasing coins a while ago since the stories nowadays are utter trash. But this was worth purchasing coins for.
Author, you should write conversation between every character with a more flexible touch. Specially, the conversation between Adams and Anderson. You are not showing their natural human behaviour. Also in some chapter you didn’t explain how Anderson felt after seeing Adams newborn power against Vitto. I hope you will work MORE on subtle common sense explanation in various conversation also with more flexible touch. Not like first 10 chapters where those conversation felt like some robots are talking. This book has the potential. Specially I am liking this very much. But due to robotic conversation I am very much frustrated.. I hope you will focus in this sector so that reader like us can appreciate your efforts.[img=recommend]
Author's review, you can ask your questions here and I will answer them to the best of abilities. thank you for reading and remember drop gifts, they are my motivation.
Honest Review. I think the author was dripping when he wrote this novel. And most likely he forgot about Mc's powers.
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this story is good 👍👍. would have loved if you hadn't dropped your infinite system novel