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摘要
What runs the world? Money! Alex understood this well, born as an unwanted child, he grew up under the roof of a billionaire yet lived like a homeless man. He would have been homeless once he turned 18 years old, but his uncle helped him marry into a rich family as a live-in son-in-law.
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I like it, the Mc backstory was unnecessary sad but it's okay, the background World is good , i like it, the magic system is cool too but i prefer technology. I hope Mc will not waste time on drama. please make a vr arc where he makes a good fantasy game but without levels, more realistic type, so the humans of earth will be anble to learn. the updating stability is irregular, i hope you will update daily please.
hmmm 1st what makes this novel a fan fiction? . . . . . 2nd the book started ok but as the story progress it slowly turns mediocre . . . . . 3rd the flow of the story is erratic, most of the time it will suddenly jumps to another point . . . . . 4th the story started to become hard to read . . . . . 5th overall the story is not worth it . . . . . it just lacks the content wherein you find your self fulfilled when reading it