摘要
FIRST COUPLE OF CHAPTERS ARE GARBAGE.
the main character will start in the percy jackson and then travel into other dimensions.
this was my first book, chapter 1-6 are really bad, and I didn't know how to write
the cover wasn't drawn by me
Only one interest. (Ai) and no more.
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I'm honestly satisfied with the work of Scathach_ in this fic you can see the effort and time she takes to make sure everyone is satisfied
Why did you make the Charcters gay. I am talking about demon slayer, Tbh i hate these type of people. Good story. This is what i hate about it.
I think it’s good. Honestly, I’d like a promise that you won’t stop uploading til like chapter 59, but I’m probably not gonna get that. However, remember that writing story outlines go a long way.
The effort is there definitely, I can see that. But the flow of the story is wack, and if just pinballing around forcing stuff to happen for example. I told so and so to go clean, Even though they would never listen to the MC, the character just goes OKAY ANYTHING FOR YOU MY BELOVED WIFE. when in the actual show the character would just spit on them and insult them to no end and this is on the first meeting, But if you improve make the story more consistent it would be 10x better!
will admit im not the best but i will get better. im not one of the "shameless" authors that will tell you other wise and then drop the story.