/ Fantasy / The New life of Naruto Uzumaki
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Discontinued…. This will be rewritten
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Could have been a great fanfic if the writing quality was better and not just a basic description of what's happening like you would describe the manga panel, I still appreciate the effort to write on the idea of what Naruto would do and change if he could live his life a second time, but the execution is really clumsy
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