摘要
"I shall strike east... and conquer."
A Targaryen prince blessed with the gift of boundless potential over all types of magic.
Men will bend to his will, whether through life or death. An endless horde of warriors who do not require rest or food will follow him to the ends of the world. He who summons fire, commands the wind and controls the flow of the sea will continue to march and conquer what is rightfully His.
This is the story of the first Dragon Emperor of the World.
(Thanks to my old friend boundlessvortex for the cover.)
(MC is an OC if you're wondering.)
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GoT and Necromancy is an interesting concept. With all the different types of magic available in this universe, necromancy won't be much of a problem to add... Forget what others say. it's an interesting concept. The grammar is good, the writing style is really nice and I also like the plot so far. I hate writing reviews but this is quite underrated... and I didn't want it to remain the same way. So, I had to add a review. I could have spammed 'EXP' to fill the 140 space... But as an author, I know how bad it feels to look at reviews filled with the term 'EXP.' Anyways, I love the fic so far and I would like to see where you take it. P.S. Imagine an army of undead dragons and the MC trying to control the white walkers. Idc if you don't do that, but that would be hilarious. Good luck buddy, and stay safe.
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The story was really good until he started conquering Westeros the way he dealt with the Baratheon family was probably the first time I was like this is stupid. It just shows what kind of weakl and emotional person he is. no ruler or king would allowing the former royal family to live. people who have claimed your throne and you let them live is one of the dumbest things you can possibly do. Your character is leave a legitimate threat to his rule live. Not to mention it almost feels like you’ve awarded your enemy. What you should have done was cut off Roberts arms and legs kept him alive chained to your throne then you should have taxed every rebel kingdom half of their total income and require the death of one in every ten adults males. That execution needs to be carried out by the actual ruling family of each territory. What do even better do what his ancestors did and completely wipe out those houses and put loyal houses to rule those areas instead.
WOW!! just WOW!! THIS IS HIDDEN GEM!!! HIDDEN GEM I SAY!! Smart MC...check! Magic.....check! Great storyflow...check! Can't wait for next chapter...check!
This is def a hidden gem, the story is very slow placed, with alot more chapters, i could 100% see this novel being one of the best GOT fanfics on this website 0
The story has, or had, a lot of potential. But it bores me, I did not come for this, maybe it is not my cup of tea how things are taking at the moment, nor the decisions that the MC has made, and will make, for the convenience of the plot, as if it has no life of its own . Still, the quality of the writing and everything else is very refreshing ... but honestly, my feelings for keeping me reading have faded as I read the chapters. If you can handle this, congratulations, the story is not bad ... although I got carried away a lot by the TAGs and made expectations inside my head, expectations that were never met. Great work and peace
Could remove the prologue and would make this much better, i cant stand the fact that a 3 year old toddler is some genius politician, can kill multiple grown men with a dagger and is also some genius sorcerer.
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Written at chapter 120. This story started off great but slowly lost its steam. Once MC achieved his goals of conquering the seven kingdoms, he didn't really do anything. Even though he knew The Others(White Walkers) were coming, he did no training or preparing the kingdom. Knowing they were stronger than him. Most of the magic trails were boring and offered nothing to him, just killing for the sake of killing. I would say only two gave something good for him, let alone test him. The Others' volume was too short and didn't really do anything. No one important died or hurt. Some of the first/important characters we meet get pushed back to the point that they don't really do anything or forgotten. The volume that Ser Jamie died in was fairly disappointing. It didn't really make sense or have a proper build to such major character for MC died in. The whole alternative future god of MC kind of ruined the story, like what was the point of our MC then. Should have done something like MC was reincarnated or something. Over started of great and became dull later on. WQ 4 SD 3 CD 2 US 2 WB 3
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AMAZING READ! Interesting Characters and development of them and the plot. Multiverse? could be or not, the potential is there. Overall juust amazing!
Loving this so far. I like how you used Crusader Kings 2 traits for this stats. . . . . . . . . .
Writing Quality - Is excelent for the quality of novels on this site. 5 stars Stability of Updates - Just finished reading it all, through the dates of the chapters there seems to be some kind of "order" but could be better. 4 stars Story Development - So, I will not spoil but the plot is not taking the canon side, and is going in completely other way. Add to the fact a Targaryen OC child and well so far I am satisfied. 5 stars Character Design - Is done wonderfully, MC and the characters around him feel real, especially mc who is an OC but actually feels like part of the world 5 stars World Background - Now as this is a fanfic I will not give the world a 5 star but author does a very good job of making the world feel alive. 4 stars
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In this fanfic there are no faceless men and Valyrian steel swords, right? ________________________________________________________________________
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PLEASE AUTHOR DON'T DROP I GIFTED YOU POWER STONE SO PLEASE PLEASE DONT ILL CURSE YOUR ENTIRE FAMILY TO ROT IF YOU DROP OF COURSE IT IS AFTER YOU DID
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it is hard to find mildly serious fictions like this where you dont hate the main character for being angsty. it is hard to find stories where the author can make the tensions between characters make up for the lack of physical risk to the mc. after all, it is unlikely for him to be hurt by most characters. however, the interactions and consequences make a good substitute. good job dude
Great fiction here! Mc is a mage and necromancer. Dont know what will he became, will he summon skeleton or shadow that will never die like Solo Leveling. Hope you dont drop it soon enough, we support you here.