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[Not My Novel, I am translating it]
Transmigrated into the world of One Piece? Since I'm here, I might as well make the best of it. Became brother of Don Quixote Doflamingo? Well, that's a done deal, can't restart. However, when the young boy discovered that he had consumed the Hito Hito no Mi, he couldn't stay calm anymore....
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Story good there just a couple problems i seen. The big ones are the names and the small one it say he eat a trask hito hito fruit. I dont think there will ever be a trash one and je didnt eat one he eat a different fruit. You do know hito hito no mi mean human human. The real name of the DF he ate is Nagi Nagi No Mi
gret story, but awful writting or translation or mtl cause they mix up names constantly and its annoying plus they also mix up shes and hes.
Just get the names right ffs. everything else seems good. I do hope you continue updating the novel tho, its pretty interesting.
You do realize Hito Hito no mi just means human fruit right? It could mean any fruit in one pice that transforms you. From Luffy to Choppa.