摘要
Warning:
-Sexual content- Dual Cultivation
( pure fertilization )
-Not a Simp Mc
-Op Mc, powerful system
-I don't give a fuck you are dying, Type MC
-Narcissist, Egoist Mc but not that mentally weak to react immediately
#Book supports game element:
- 500 Powerstone = 1 lottery for MC
- 50 Golden ticket = 1 lottery for Mc
- Holiday theme special plotlines.
Cover: Thanks Miso_Hen
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Ah! Here we go again, another edgy villain novel that haunts the protagonist, aka, the chosen son of heaven.
Tsk! Such a cliche! Constantly used plotline with repeated storyline. Hunt the protagonist with a Jade like beautiful sister and steal his sister after 50 chapters milking his luck.
Hunt the protagonist with this cheat, hunt the protagonist with that cheat.
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Beta: Ahhh! Damn it... When will the good day come?
Author: Well, don't ask me, I just got here.
Beta: Fuck it! I want a good story.
Author: Junior, trust this senior, this is a good one
Beta: Arggh! Shut up! I hate it.
Author: courting death! Go and ask Yama how good this is.
Beta: Y-You, how dare you?
Author: I will give you 10 breaths of time, cripple your cultivation, and scram!!
Beta: Good! Very Good!
Author: *Raises his eyebrows and turns beta into useless dust particles*
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Chad: senior, I have been enlightened, I wish to know more about what you have in this ancient script.
Author: ah! An intelligent and wise junior, you have raised a very good question. Here are things this forbidden ancient script contains.
•Sinful activity: this book contains the profound sinful activity of balancing the Yin and Yang, by, shoving the mighty Yang rod in the Yin Hole.
•System - MC relationship: fuck... Ahem* Ahem* sorry for tongue slip. Forget the classic old system, here take this hot waifu tsundere system. ( not that edgy )
•Steal everything: junior! Are you tired of Mc only stealing the jade beauties that were created for the protagonist? Well, let's process further and add the Protagonist's mother, aunt, and sister, into Mc's harem.
Chad: oh! The senior really blessed me with such a divine forbidden Scripture, here take my money and give me the chapters.
Author: oh! Ho Ho! I haven't finished yet.
Here are a few more.
•Cold, ruthless, protagonist: sorry, but, he will even kill the child as long as he gets something in return. Throw; morality and humanity out the window. ( not a classical ‘Villan’ who only hunts the protagonist. The story doesn't just revolve around hunting the chosen one, )
•Just because you are a heroine doesn't mean, you can step on my head, know your place. Mc will even kill the heroine if they bother him.
Chad: Say no less senior, from today onward, I will join your sect and follow you till I die. * Kneels and accept author as his master *
Author: Very well, here is the key to join my sect.
https://discord.com/invite/QaCzkvHsuN
https://discord.com/invite/tknrUfPfrb
https://dsc.gg/culturesect
Chad: Thanks senior, I will join the sect immediately.
Author: I see great potential in you junior, trust me, you will go way forward.
Chad: You honor me with your words senior, please, let me read the forbidden Scripture that is banned by the heavens.
Author: say no more!
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Tags: OP MC, SYSTEM, HAREM, ACTION, ADVENTURE, THREESOME, Not so dumb Mc, Ancient treasure, Edgy writing, I don't give a Shit -Mc, not my problem- Mc, powerful battles, dual cultivation, diverse race harem, Evil Mc.
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Read up to chapter 90, all I say is either this story would be your favorite or your most hated. It's masterpiece or cringe. However, author, I hope there will 8 some with his mothers and grandmother, also the mother is a little annoying with how controlling she is. Also, her family seems shady, Mc shouldn't visit them or he will get cooked. Also, please Buff MC, from alpha he became beta with powerful enemies popping from here and there. He even got kidnapped by woman, it's a good thing he managed to get some bed action with the sect master but, if men kidnapped him? That would be bad. However, I like the cold and arrogant nature of Young Master, finally happy to read an actual Villain story where Young Master actually likes Young Master but instead of getting beaten down by the protagonist, he beats them back and steals their woman and mother. Smut on later chapter are fire, compared to the early chapter💦. I hope you can give him a villain halo that can spread protagonist Halo😭😭 I wanna see how Mc toys with protagonists and women surrounding him.
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Honestly, the novel isn't bad. Problem is, the main character. Now, i don't have anything against ruthless MC's, but this guy is the type who searches for any excuse to cause others harm. The type of MC who can't get it up if he doesn't bring pain to another, and can only get off by humiliating and hurting others. The description of the MC is quite inaccurate, since instead of uncaring, he is sadistic and enjoys violence, especially against women. A novel i cannot recommend since it seems more like an outlet to vent someone's violent tendencies and vileness. No, MC is not taking revenge. MC doesn't have a deep background, nor any dramatic past. He is acting like trash dumpster because that's how he likes to act, while author begs for money to make the story better lol.
Best of Best🤣🤣 quite funny and lemons🍋🍋. But, dang, Mc shoots 1 litre of ‘come’ black mails his maid and have 3 sum with mother daughter. 😈😈😈😈😈 waiting for more sinful act of lusty young master.
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another amazing book !! (for me) Harem +1⭐ Op MC +1⭐ No NTR +1⭐ No simp MC 1+⭐ Bunos+1⭐ that's 5⭐for me
It’s a s*xual assault wish fufillment novel. Genuinely surprised it has as many chapters as it does.
I wanted to read your novel, but before that, I would like to ask if the main character is a dishwasher or not. You see, I feel disgusted by protagonists who like older and married women.
5 stars even before reading, just for the synopsis—that's how a synopsis should be.
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
It’s pretty bad. It romanticizes the useless trash mindset of being a narcissist that also treats women poorly. It seems the author has a kink for this, because they’ve made several other novels with the exact same concept. Very neat.
5 star ⭐ for the sypnosis! Although i hope this novel doesn't disappoint me. what is the best time to plant grass seed in the morning and I can get you some
Which women have gotten pregnant also is their a link to see your Ai picture of the mc and his women or harem?
one of the mid fic around. not best but not worst either. ita fine to read, but it might be worth your time to read better fic
( Author here for the second review ) Read this thing, if you want to know about the book... 📝Writing Quality- 3/5 — Seriously, I don't know how to write, I am a science major so, you can say my grammar sucks but hey, I found out people like my grammar. No cap! The Grammarly app shows I have 100+ grammar errors per chapter yet, people like my grammar. Imma be honest, I write how I speak ( English ) and no, I am not from an English country. Also, there may be typos here and there so, please point it out so that the next reader may have a better reading experience. 📝 Story Development: 5/5 — Sigh! To be honest, for a lemon🍋🍋 Novel, this is the best story development you see, and no! I am not bragging, if you like to read Lemon without a beta Mc and a good story where Mc isn't scared then, it is a good place for you. Yeah! Mc doesn't need hundreds of chapters to Fugg a woman. He just needs 3-4 chapters ( I mean just a meeting ) You can find; Manipulation, BlackMail, threats, etc. Also, the adventure is good + making connections and the world building is somewhat good. 📝Character design: 5/5 — what can I say, I design my character from one hand 😜. ( female character ) 📝Updating stability: 5/5 — 3 chaps a day guaranteed. However, when I have some work or I am busy then, 2 chaps a day. 📝 World Background: 3/5 — for a Lemon, this is the best world building you will find with cultivation, pills, and diverse race of harem members~ ahem* ahem* I mean, diverse race, culture, traditions, worlds, and other stuff. ————— Unique things about my book: 👍Constellation Choice: as a reader/ constellation, you have complete mastery over the main character and world. You can actively change the story with your participant. 👍Pay to win: donate gifts = Mc getting stronger. ( well with the karma system, it will be somewhat balanced 😂 for a better flow of the story ) 👍 Lemons: Spicy😜😈 👍 mirroring author: talk nicely and get a nice reply, talk badly and get a bad reply. 👍 begger author: author will beg for a power stone daily. ( yeah! You better donate it or you dying single this life, no cap! ) # Downside; 👎 No Ntr, No Yuri: this book doesn't have Netorare, but there is Netori. Also, no Yuri. 👎 No Slow progression: Mc will gain strength fast and the story progresses relatively fast, just in 50 chapters Mc has multiple blood claudins ( Seggs Sl@ves ) 👎 Cringe dialogue and cliche plot: Sad life brothers, this book is affected by cringe cultivation dialogue like, “ Go and meet Yama, ” “ Courting death, ” “ It seems this brat hasn't seen Mt.Tai ”