/ Fantasy / THE LOST GOD
摘要
In a magical world where danger
No One 17 and Under Admitted
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-- 推薦票
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2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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I am self reviewing, reader have to at least need to read up to 30 chapter. the world setup and most of the line are new. I hope you all like it and leave the comment so. it can help me to know you option
it quite good. I need more updates. don't look down at the descrption. the author shows weak Mc for only a few chapters and built-up character development. there was also a funny love poem in chapter 11 which I like. What I want to know most was MC background, which was less discuss in chapter 8. from a few words, I can feel that mc has quite an Overpower background. Mc is an orphanage who was adopted by other families[img=recommend][img=recommend]. I can only reveal this much if I reveal more then the author might beat me in his fantasy world.
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