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The long forgotten system

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作者: Garbagecan115

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As soon as Thomas noticed his body laying there dead on top of a puddle of his own blood he sees a large mirror next to his body.

Thomas was so focused on his dead body that he didn't notice the mirror at first. As soon as he noticed the mirror he started walking towards it wondering what the hell it was, what was going on.

As Thomas walks up to the mirror he sees himself.
But something was off he didn't notice it right away but as he was getting closer to the mirror he started to see his shadow move and unusual ways.

Finally as he got to the mirror his shadow started rising behind him, Thomas was dead but it felt like his heart was beating so fast his chest hurt.

Then he heard it, A slight whisper barely noticeable but he could hear it, it was telling him to touch the mirror Thomas felt hesitant.

But he was dead what's the point of hesitate when you're dead so we got up to the mirror and touched it.

As soon as he touch the mirror everything went white he couldn't see anything he felt blinded by the pure whiteness that surround it his vision.

He didn't know how long he was like that, how long he was surrounded by the pure whiteness that felt endless he couldn't move he couldn't hear and he couldn't feel anything, it was so weird to be stuck like that but what could he do?

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thomas_Dodson

Slow start I like the reincarnated part with the mirror

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