/ Book&Literature / The Life of Corrin Laplaus
摘要
Ever get tired of the same old broken MC beating up Voldemort and making friends with Harry, dissing Ron, and capturing all the ladies' hearts? The only part I agree with is dissing Ron. But he might not even exist in this...
This story will be taking place in an alternate universe where Tom Riddle ceases to exist! Sorta going for an idyllic slice of life-y approach to Hogwarts and what not, though I'm surgically implanting some bad stuff because.... it's what the kids like these days, ya know? Ok I lied it not very idyllic atm but yeah.
I own none of anything except my OC's
Lore and stuff might be inaccurate at times but I... plot magic.
Current update schedule is one a MONTH LMAO takes me a while to get motivated but maybe more if I feel like it
Dunno how long this will last but enjoy the ride!
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Wholesomeness heals all! come and read this book to be healed. Note this book will not promise or guarantee to heal any wounds physical or otherwise.
interesting story and good dialogues continue like this I hope your fan-fic will be successful, I hope but I am really enjoying the chapter note 100000000
It is a good story the only problem is that you spent too much time on their childhood. you should've done a time skip. ..................................................................................................................................................
Soy español, para empesa la historia es buena sin embargo le falta mejorar bastante, la historia comiensa bien tal vez solo demaciado endulsada y con pocos detalles que aporten a la historia y algunos detalles sin importancia que entran en relleno. El desarroyo del personaje parece plano y muy tonto para este tipo de historia, le falta un desarroyo de pensamiento con progreso y poner mas puntos de vista y pensamiento para completar la escritura. En cuanto a lo demas es poco realista y muy infantilisado todo( para el mundo de harry potter ) y le falta ese toque magico que suele categorisar estas historias para la trama te rocomiendo realisar desarroyo de personalidad mas madura cuando son niños ya que no es agradable de leer y muchas veces no funcionan o solo alargan la historia por lo demad es muy bueno y con buena sustancia se recomendaria plantear un desarroyo mas completo para que sea agradable al menos desde mi perspectiva
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Time for a shameful Author review. I passed most of my Engrish classes with decent enough grades so it should be readable at least, I know what I'm doing story wise but I might make some like real time events that may or may not involve power stones and may or may not result in permanent deaths *nudge* *nudge* *wink* *wink* I'm not referee or judge so I'll gladly take bribes!