/ Fantasy / The Legendary Witch's Pet is a Werewolf
摘要
In this world where greed rules above all, who should one trust and who should one be wary of?
Serene Lloyd, a young witch of the much-feared Legendary Harper Village, had never found her life lacking until she found herself a new pet. Well to be exact, a momentary pet someone trusted her to take care of.
This cute puppy who was even way timider than a mouse, what would become of him in the hands of this young witch? Can he become more than a lovable pet? A friend? A trusted confidant or even, a lover?
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For those of you who enjoy magical adventures with solid storylines, major and minor magical battles, mysterious past whose truth was uncertain and struggle of power between light and dark, witches and beasts, right and wrong, and the clashes of beliefs, this book might be your cup of tea.
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Disclaimer: This book is a work of fiction set in a fictional world. Any resemblance to actual persons, actual events, etc is purely coincidental.
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What stands out is the good description of thoughts and some scenes that are easy to read. But the dialogue does not directly reflect in the dialogue itself who speaks and with what intonation. And when more than 2 characters are involved. There is confusion. There is very little information about the world for chapter 21, nothing is really known, except that they are located on one of the continents. The story of the protagonist's brother is also not fully disclosed. The werewolf, as I understand it, is still a puppy, and later we learn that he is a representative of a dangerous clan. I hope the author will tell about everything in more detail.
I had Soo much fun reading this. The heroine is so cool and I love the descriptions
The author does not mess with description. Every single detail makes it impossible to even miss a single item inside any sort of scene. Amazing job.
I think this book is very good. I will say, the descriptions can sometimes take you out of the actual story, but besides that, it is written well. The world building is life-life. When needed, the story and world building is definitely there. Good job!
It's well descriptive that's for sure, the way you explain... no how you show us the imagery of every scenes was something that is above novice, this book really gives you that vibes. I like to see you rise, so I'll continue with my support. good luck!
The beginning pulls you in and makes you feel exactly what the characters are feeling. The writing style is incredibly rich, though there are some grammatical errors, it's not to the point that it ruins the reading experience. Highly recommend this and can't wait to see where it goes.
I just read the first few chapters and I have to say that I admire your creativity in this story. You are the kind of author who deserves to be supported. Keep writing
I found this novel to be an enjoyable and well-written book. The characters were fleshed out and relatable, and the plot was engaging from start to finish of every chapter. The author's writing style was easy to follow and kept me engaged throughout the story.
One of the few 5 stars I accorded. Well deserved, but there is still room for improvement. Your writing quality is excellent, and the premise itself is original and has the hallmarks of a top 10 candidate. I strongly recommend people to patiently give 10 chapters a try and judge for themselves. I reckon they won't be disappointed. As I advised on Discord, I think your retention might suffer a little due to a slower pacing. Compared to what your average WN reader enjoys, yours takes a while to get into the thick of it. Best of luck. <3
This story is amazing. Descriptions, narration and pace, everything is awesome. Love the Silver Fairy and would be waiting to see how this story unfolds ❤️
The writing is brilliant, no doubt. If you love description, this will a delight to your reader hearts. The setting is very detailed and flows well. Keep it up! 🙌
This is a great story. The author is so descriptive they paint a picture with words. At times beautiful, at times exciting, always entertaining. You will not be disappointed .
A skillfully written story that instantly captured my attention. Author, you did a great job providing a vivid description of the characters and the solid world-building. Overall, this is by far one of the best stories out there.
Read til chapter 10 and it was quite a fun ride so far! The concept is fun, and her witch-ness is funny and cool at the same time. Haha Anyway, I will definitely continue following this
You're writing style is quite unique. The details you have written in the starting like that wind one that it is my territory and many more are quite nice. The story hooks to read further; the count heir struggling and recalling his humiliating past and suddenly saw a petite woman with a pointed hat floating in air this is all good. Awaiting further updates.
The writing is really good! Very vivid imagery and concise. A lot of people(Men) were introduced so it got a little confusing in the beginning but it makes sense because it's the introduction of the story. Hope you do well in the contest!
A pleasant description that is light and flows like rivers. A great read nonetheless! Good job. Also I like the MC, and the story is engaging too! kudos to the narrative! Good luck in the future!