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The Journey To The Top (Multiversal fanfic) [Completed]
4.3 (16 評分)
摘要
This is my first fanfic critisism is welcomed
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Synopsis:
A soul drifts away from the cycle of reincarnation and into the void, something that has never happened before. A large amount of time passes with nothing happening, until an entity appears before the soul. Read to find out more.
Current world: DxD
Finished worlds: Arifureta
Cover is not mine
Characters and the original story in this fanfic are also not mine all credit goes to their respective creators.
I will say this now this novel is pretty cliché, I am not forcing you to read. If you’re dissatisfied about the direction, flow or any other aspect of the novel you are free to leave and if you choose to leave a comment on the way out please make it helpful, and not something you wrote just to be hurtful. Please enjoy.
Also mc is strong since chap 4 be warned
Also, try to read until the start of Tortus before leaving criticism
AU elements
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4.3
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Journey to the top? Became OP by chapter 4 and a god by the following chapter. Roll credits. There is no journey to the top. It’s journey of an overpowered god without limitations to his interactions with mortals, as he goes collecting girls and play in the children’s playground (read ‘mortal realm where he is OP but will pretend to not be OP’)
Fast Pace but in a good way I hope and expect more chapter since the novel is so good and I mean one of the best and I cant really find many arifureta ff since it is either dropped or in hiatus. If you like op mc and loving wholesome harem with good development then this is for you
Honest review from me. In my opinion you should only read this when your bored and other novels in your list aren’t updated. Pretry cliché in some aspects. This is my first fic and as such I do have stuff I need to work on. I am however confident in my release schedule. Still, you yourself might find this to your liking and in that case please do leave a review.
The novel is fast-paced, the grammar is passable, and with the rate at which the mc is getting stronger I find it hard for him to have problems as he can simply just crush it with his raw power alone but due to the enjoyment I receive reading this I gave it this score. If I do rate it as a novel the score ranges from 3.7-4.1 imo if you have nothing to read it's a fine time waster and considering this is just the beginning I reckon you can make it better.
Good book it’ just easygoing somthing to read when you had a long day and just want to relax The MC is likable and I love the fact he doesn’t start blushing and stuttering every time he speaks with a female that trope is so overdone in most fanfics
This story is a hundred percent wish fulfillment to the point that it is difficult to even look at it without wanting to flip the table because of how unrealistic the relationships are. Please for the love of all that is holy don't ever write something like this again.
fast paced story but not bad.mc become op in the beginning of the novel but its still enjoyble to read.romance is okay...overall a decent read...
Buena la historia me encanta sigue así 👌😸👌👌😸👌👌 casi no hay historia de arifureta sigue así 👌😸👌👌 me encanta sigue así 😃😃😊😃😃😊😊😃😊😃😃😊😊😊😊😃😊😃😃 iibuena historia sería bueno que ponga de que piensa de mc o suposición de los demás personas acerqua del compañero etc un consejo
it's a really good story i suggest you read it👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍[img=coins]👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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A rather ‘generic’ wish fulfilment fic, it is nothing particularly special but likewise it doesn’t do anything particularly bad. It is a good fast paced read with reliable update stability to enjoy when you are struggling to find other stuff. My only real criticism is that the fast pacing doesn’t really allow much character definition for the harem members.
AYO why does this not have a rating. this is fast paced. I like the story and how it is developing. what world is the MC going to go to next?
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