摘要
In a world where boundaries blur and reality fractures, a captivating journey awaits. "The Ivory Rose" is a mesmerizing novel that explores the mysteries and wonders of an alternate realm.
The story follows Eva, a spirited and adventurous young woman who finds herself thrust into the enigmatic parallel universe. Drawn by a cosmic force beyond comprehension, Eva awakens to a world filled with infinite possibilities and unimaginable beauty.
As Eva delves deeper into this mysterious realm, she encounters a black knight, a figure cloaked in darkness and secrecy, Intrigued by him Eva is compelled to unravel the truth behind his veiled existence. Little does she know that their destinies are intertwined in ways she could never have imagined.
In this parallel universe, love blooms unexpectedly.
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2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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I like how the story is progressing but I would love to know more details about the main female character.
I like how descriptive you are although each paragraphs felt so long. It has a good pacing just enough to my liking. It's not that good but not bad either. I think you can improve on this part later on. As for the updating stability, I dunno what to say since it only has 6 chapters so far. I should make another review when you reach 20 chapters or so. As for the world building, can't say anything about that yet except that the author is doing a good job so far.