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Love it and I originally read this in fanfiction.net.👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️
So glad this has been continued, and the constant updates are what I look forward to during my day. Thank you for the amazing work. even your just bored
Author I don't know you already create a new ff... I love all your work author~san❤ And I like this novel too 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
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God story to pass time. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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I love it so far ..............................................................................................................................
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Amazing novel, of the same quality of his other novels, the plot is smooth with no forced situations. The character design is praise worthy. All in all definitely supporting it.
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This is strange how the mc is just super frustrating to follow but I didn't drop this novel, because some of the important decisions he makes are dumb sometimes(I mean, he's complaining bc he can't use all his items for too long bc he doesn't have enough mana, but he made his items to work with HIS mana instead of the AMBIANT mana), I guess I didn't drop this because the mc gets what he wants most of the time and gets many powers almost each chapter. Another annoying thing is that he uses his Omnifabrication power dumbly, I mean, he creates items that are most of the time just weapons or random items that are supposed to be op and sometimes 'armors' (e.g his stands) but he doesn't strengthen his body at all(anyone could steal his items if they have a stealth skill and he would then be completly powerless), he could create one time use pills that would have many effects, like giving him skills, strenghtening his body, make his mana denser and purer, or rings that would absorb ambiant mana to constantly strengthen his WHOLE body, not just his mana... During the story the mc is 'calculative and smart' but he's often underestimating his opponents, often thinking with his d*ck and because of that he makes shi*tty mistakes (like with Darkness at the end of Arc 1), the mc is inconsistent and we don't really have any information on his past. It's also annoying how his powers are depicted as op against weaklings and side characters, while he's still struggling against important characters(I mean, he has all those 'op' things but says that he could be killed by Grayfia or Serafall and that his time stop is useless against gods), he always gets nerfed and that's sh*tty coming from the author. With his Omnifabrication any normal person would have done way better than him just by not taunting Chris and making actual USEFUL things.