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章節 2: Chapter 1

It was an a average day for me and I was walking to my school while reading a new fanfic of a boy being reincarnated into Naruto. It didn't take long for me to reach the school. It took only around five minutes since I lived relatively close. My first class was on the second story of the building so I had to walk up the flight of heavily crowded stairs. So I slowly walked up the stairs to another boring day.

—{TIMESKIP TO THE END OF THE DAY}—-

The bell just rang signaling the end of classes. I was walking down the stairs when I heard a shout from behind me that filled me with dread. "Hey Princess Alexandria" followed my the laughter of my tormentors goons. I hated him with a passion since he always bullying me for everything, from my name to just being alive. His name was Carl. I have stopped counting the amount of times that he told me to jump off a building or hate myself because I'm a outcast. He usually beat me up every couple of days as well.

He started coming after me and I tried to dodge his leg but was to slow and he tripped me down the stairs. I fell face first into a step and heard a loud CRACK. I realized that he broke my nose again as I kept sliding down the stairs scratching up my face and stomach. I thought of telling my parents this time but got hit with the cold truth that they wouldn't care. Their most likely response would be saying that i should fight back and not bring shame to the family.

All the while I am thinking this they are punching and kicking me hoping to get a reaction. They won't get one because I have learned to tune out the pain because of how many times this has happened to me. I heard Carl shout at them to dump me in the forest behind the school.

I felt myself being grabbed by the arms and legs being lifted off the ground and Brought behind the school. They brought my near the bushes and tries and through me into the trees. I felt even more bones brake and one of my elbows snap. I lie there and start questioning.

I start to wonder why the universe was set out to make my life hell on earth. My family ignores me or blames me for things I never did. They a sometimes even forget to feed me. Teachers don't care and bully me. I am beat up by Carl almost every day of the week and my parents think he is a friend because of his lies. And now I and sitting in a forest bleeding with a broken leg, a broken arm and another arm snapper at an odd angel at the elbow.

I am trying to crawl out of the forest but can't. As the pain starts coming in realization hits me like truck kun. I might actually die out here. No one will bother either me. Not the teachers or my family.

Slowly the week went on as I got increasingly hungry and thirsty. Overall it took me 3 days to succumb to my wounds and thirst passing out for the last time as i moved of from this cruel place.

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I woke up in a blank white void wondering where I was and who I was until the memory's flooded my mind. All of the experiences of my past life hit me like a brick wall. The pain was excruciating. I wanted to cry to scream at wherever god there was to take this away from me slowly the pain went away. Little did I know but the pain along with the memory's made a crack in my mind as my Retina also formed a crack.

AN:

GOD TALKING

Human talking

Suddenly a booming voice shouted. "WELCOME ALEXANDRIA." I could only guess to who is was and asked "are you god?" "YES I AM AND I HAVE SEEN YOUR. LIFE." He replied.

"Am I going to heaven or hell" I asked.

"NEITHER YOU HAVEN'T DONE ANYTHING BAD NOR DONE ANYTHING WORTHY OF GOING TO HEAVAN. NORMALLY IF THIS WAS THE CASE A MORTAL WOULD BE SENT TO LIMBO AND LIVE IN A DREAM WORLD WITHOUT MEMORIES UNTIL THEY DO SOMETHING WORTHY OF GETTING INTO HEAVEN OR HELL" was his reply.

"So then am I going to limbo?"

"NOT NECESSARILY" he explained, "I HAVE ANOTHER OPTION FOR PEOPLE WHO HAVE HAD A BAD LIFE IS LIKE YOURS. YOU SHAL BE REIN-"

"I can be reincarnated!!!!" I shouted "like in those fanfictions!!"

"YES LIKE THOES FANFICS" he replied slightly annoyed that i interrupted him. I noticed his tone and got scared that he would get angry with me and send me to hell. Suddenly I heard laughing. I look up to the smiling face of god and he said "DO NOT BE AFRAID CHILD I AM NOT MAD. YOU ARE FORGIVEN. SO, WHERE WOULD YOU LIKE TO BE REINCARNATED IN. AND I WILL ALSO GIVE YOU 3 WISHES."


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I hope you like this chapter you can critique me whenever you like since I am still a beginner in writing fanfics. The next chapter should come out soon.

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