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100,000 years ago, a meteorite crashed into Earth, granting a 17-year-old caveman the power humans have craved for millenniums, immortality. Though originally a savage and cruel caveman, millenniums have let Acheron refine himself and surpass the epitome of Humanity, basically, a god on Earth. With his power, he mastered all forms of combat, every language, all the arts, and much more. He sometimes created empires, sometimes built empires, sometimes destroyed empires, at times, even his own. Today, mutants with superpowers walk among the public, it is kept a secret by the governments throughout the world, and events pertaining to them are covered up but doesn't stop Acheron from interfering with their plans.
2 months ago, his oldest adopted daughter passed away, she was 96 years old. Though he cherishes all the children in his family, she was without a doubt, one of his favorites.
"Her last wish was for me to have a normal life but what do children do in this era?" Acheron asks one of his adopted sisters. "They go to school, Lord Acheron," she says. "School? Will it be entertaining?" he asks, "It would at the very least be a new experience" she replies. "Make it happen!" he orders. " Yes! I will do it immediately, Lord Acheron" she says.
He, who was there when the first Homo Sapiens migrated out of Africa and existed way before the wheel was created, will let nothing interfere with his daughter's last wish and will slaughter anyone that stands in his way.
P.S this is not a Marvel or DC fanfic.
I will also be posting this on RoyalRoad.com
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Honestly, I can't help but give this a one hundred percent 5 star review because this is just that good. I mean it has awesome characters and an amazing concept for a story. I myself personally have grown numb to the amount of OP protagonists that are always so fucking dark I mean, don't get me wrong I love those but this is just a nice refreshing change of pace for once. You can tell that the story doesn't take itself too seriously all the time which usually Boggs down a lot of stories. But this has a happy go lucky vibe throughout so that makes the moments where it hits you with something truly tragic or ****ed up it's a lot more impactful.
Personaly it's the best novel i have probably read so far and i have read a lot... I realy recomend it. It has wresh, new story. The the emotional detail is realy something. If you want to quit at first school part just read a bit more you won't regret it.
Historian must be really lazy to not discover MC whose not hiding at all and doing high profile things. Anways... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I am the exp of my sword. webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless review. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!.
overrated trash. skips a whole lot of possible content (plot, world-building and character development of MC) while jumping straight into an uninspired high school rom-com setting where the *mysterious* MC can bully idiot rich kids
I’ve read enough to qualify for a review. So far, the protagonist seems stupid and oblivious to the world he literally has more experience in than any other being alive! Also, the characters seem like extras. Reading a story should make you believe that character is real, but it seems to me like they are only there to make the protagonist seem cooler/badass. Additionally, the plot is a bit . . . stupid. The protagonist makes dumb decisions and the plot seems suited in his favor. Fights happen just because, and the author keeps forgetting they’re in a school. The protagonist based high school off of an anime, which is subordinate recommended. It’s silly in my opinion. The writing is sluggish and dull, and it seems as if it’s being rushed through. Overall, the only time I’d recommend this is if you like dumb characters and world building, or dumb plots that revolve around the character.
I must say it's good, a very nice story and I'll be looking forward to how it develops further. Now to reach the 140 words needed. All my devotion betrayed I am no longer afraid I was too blinded to see How much you've stolen from me You want to know why I feel so horrified I let my innocence die You want to know why I can't be pacified You made me bury something I won't be sleeping tonight I only wanted a blessing made Now I've been labeled a renegade It seems so clear now what I must do You're no immortal, I won't let them Deify you They view you as the new messiah Deify you Renew belief in some demented man You want to know why It seems the passion has died We've all been living this lie You want to know why my Will's been fortified You made me hunger again Good luck sleeping tonight I only wanted a blessing made Now I've been labeled a renegade It seems so clear now what I must do You're no immortal, I won't let them Deify you They view you as the new messiah Deify you Renew belief in some demented man All my devotion betrayed I am no longer afraid All my devotion betrayed I am no longer afraid I was too blinded to see How much you've stolen from me I was too blinded to see All my devotion betrayed I am no longer afraid I was too blinded to see How much you've stolen from me I only wanted a blessing made Now I've been labeled a renegade It seems so clear now what I must do You're no immortal, I won't let them Deify you They view you as the new messiah Deify you Renew belief in some demented man I only wanted a blessing made Now I've been labeled a renegade It seems so clear now what I must do You're no immortal, I won't let them Deify you They view you as the new messiah Deify you Renew belief in some demented man I was too blinded to see How much you've stolen from me The song has nothing to do with the story
I don't have much time but. I wanted to use my remaining 1% battery to express my love and passion about this novel, although mc is a bit
Well, the only thing i can say about this work is marvelous. There are only few novels that make me shiver when i'm reading them. Hope that this shiver will always be present when i'm reading this piece of art.
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I'mma be honest first 3 or so chapters were really good and I was excited for the rest. The writing quality could be a little better but I'm just being a little bit picky. However I feel like everything when he got to the highschool was just not that good though. For example "the big breasted beauty" ok fine if you were just talking about her breasts... whatever; Not every other time you are talking about her though! It just comes across as lazy. Also, don't make a girl get a crush on him from walking in the room it's kinda awkward. I get that you may like anime but the mc speaks interchangeably different languages and you didn't translate ecchi to pervert or something similar? Sorry I don't want to be too harsh. I'll still read it as well. But the writing makes the girls seem very 2 dimensional and just not very interesting. I don't want to try to tell you what to do but at least in my opinion the story would be much more compelling and interesting if you made the girls less like the 2d cutouts in bad harem anime. Finally this is not super important but Is the MC black? I mean I assumed so since he was one of the first humans. Not to be racist or anything but almost no one in Japan is black so usually it would usually be noted in a Japanese girls internal thoughts. Is that why everyone comments on how black his hair and eyes are? I don't usually post criticism but I liked the story at the start so I wanted to give my 2 cents.
One of the most important criteria for a novel is the personality of the mc, he can be weak or strong as long as he is intelligent, mature and cold hearted when needed it’s Okay for me. I hate when we have a protagonist that have lived for thousands of years and act like a 15 years old kid; so I can tell you that this one of the best mc from 100+ that I have read, you can also add WAO.
Story is amazing with an immortal character whose gone through life in interesting ways. He didn't start out as some god he suffered 90,000 years of loniless and torment. Before making his family and did I mention he absorbs other Mutants powers. He also ain't no simp MC he gets them girls but isn't like every Mc in harem story seducing ever woman he sees. The romance build up happens naturally and there's a good amount of detail on his past and the overall history of this parallel earth and his interaction in it over the past 100,000 years. Goes into a fair amount of detail around the world and its interactions shows a lot of emotion but still keeping it hilarious. The action scenes are incredible a lot of fighting and Mc is brutal. Has a wide cast of characters who play important roles whether it be in his past or in the present and how they defined him. Including on why he's attending a super high school occasionally rest of time he's traveling the globe. The Mc also loves trolling people It shows he intreracted with famous historical figures and people from legends his growth as person and his desire to die but being unable. This world is full of mutant characters. If I were to describe it those Universe is like the X-Men universe and a fantasy world had a kid who then had a kid with Sci Fi Elements and had Martial Arts/Wuxia ancestry.
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I’m going to tell you right now, this novel is almost god-tier. If Author-kun stuck to a consistent upload schedule, then it would be god-tier. (I’m not criticizing Lord Ainz tho, I know people have lives.
Great novel. Only wish there were more frequent updates. Used to be 2 Chapters a week now its 1 kinda sad, but either way its still a great novel that I will recommend for people to read.
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Shameless author here, this is my first novel, i hope you guys like it. Any serious reviews will be much appreciated, ill try to meet your expectations the best i can, i wont make them a priority tho, its my novel after all.