/ Book&Literature / The Illusive Mage
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A butterfly flaps its wings and Hagrid finds himself unable to take Harry to Diagon Alley, things devolve from there.
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I'm reading chapter 3, and the story is good. So more chapter please! Or more chapters in your other FF is good too. 👍😁👍👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
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A great Fanfic as usual, I like the whole politics shenanigans and the family magic. The author always do a good job with the world building and character development so no worries for the story continuation.
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TOP-TIER nuff said in my opinion... Although, I will gladly say more. Throughout the seven chapters I have read, the writing has been wonderful in terms of grammar, plot development, and character consistency. Being a reasonable pace that meshes well with this fanfiction is truly a blessing, of which, I don't find frequently. Many, many props to the Author! I love your work thus far and hope to continue in doing so. p.s. contains some smutish sequences and lewdness but dont let that stop anyone from from giving this budding masterpiece a read p.p.s. 0-0 like seriously READ THIS MF it issss GOLD
I'm a fan of your style of writing and the length of your chapters (for all your stories)....man please I want more!!!! goooooooooooooooooooood
Estoy esperando el próximo cap esta es realmente una buena historia Porcierto luna va estar en el harém??? Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp