/ Book&Literature / The Huntress and her Lion
摘要
Once upon a time, this is how stories normally begin, but this story is not as happy as people believe all stories should go. This story is about her hardship, pain, and suffering but not without happiness, love, acceptance, and friendship. This story is about Skye Potter Fem! Harry Pairing: Artemis/Fem Harry... Rating might change #Whitetigerwolf Monster Challenge #CrossPosted Fanfiction.com and AO3.
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so far the story is good the character Divine is good can't wait to see what's in stock for the future. not sure about the update since I'm just reading this first time
I really like the story so far, but I think if you want to continue this story, you REALLY need to think up a different "MacGuffin" that forces her to attend Hogwarts. The mere idea of the wizarding government holding the capability of just randomly and remotely stripping people of their magic is so ridiculous, that it essentially invalidates every conflict in the world of Harry Potter. Voldemort, Grindelwald or any of their followers, they could never become a threat because by your logic, they could just strip their magic when they break the law, or pass laws specifically against them.