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A royal hunter catches a swan which turned in to a beautiful maiden. They soon fall in love and get married, but the King also fell in love with his wife and He attempts to scheme him away to get his wife.
This short story is inspired from a Russian folk tale I read in the past.
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A nice short story, slight adaptation from Go I Know Not Whither and Fetch I Know Not What . An Eastern Russia Folk Tale. But you should added many more variation. This now seems not very original.....
揭示劇透 This is a nice short story with a good starter. Although you only do this for the badge, you sure don't cut corners on your work. Good job, author-sama~!
I make this short story from a folk tale originated from Eastern Russia. Hope you all readers like it :) Best read in an afternoon while sipping tea and snacking on biscuits :)
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