/ Book&Literature / The Heavens Gift Pack: Start with One Punch Man
摘要
Lin Bei travels through the world of One Punch Superman, carrying the Wanjie gift pack system with him.
Zombie man: Why are you immortal? Are you also a guinea pig for the House of Evolution?
Naruto Uzumaki: Nine Tails are obviously the plug-in my dad left for me, why do you have it too?
Beast Kaido: Impossible, I am obviously the last true dragon in this world!
Lin Bei: What are you talking about? Didn’t you all give me these?
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The story is very bad. MC is pathetic. The author changes the original names of the characters and uses Chinese, Korean or Asian names. [img=exp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
If I could give it a lower rating I would story all over the place has no concept and the writing is so bad I dont even understand what I’ m reading at all.
overalll a good book except the writing quality its absoulte trash except that everything is awesome except some unnatural character changes. keep it up
Garbage stories, stupid, stupid authors can't make stories, trash story👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👍👍👍👍👍👍👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕
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Do not post things without editing them if they are not your own translation, mtl, and if this is your's get a editor the work is painful to read from the 1 chapter. Note for reader this is not the only one so don't think he will edit
Well we all know that the writing quality is very bad, but still you have no choice but to read it since its interesting. And I also wish he goes to Marvel 🌎
Do not post things without editing them if they are not your own translation, mtl, and if this is your's get a editor the work is painful to read from the 1 chapter. Note for reader this is not the only one so don't think he will edit.