/ Anime & Comics / The Great Swordsman in Naruto World
摘要
Traveling through the world of Naruto, Yagyu activated the Strongest Template System and obtained the Template of the world's number one swordsman 'Hawkeye'. Since then, a strong swordsman far surpassing White Fang was born.
"In terms of swordsmanship, I, Madara, would like to call you the strongest among those who fight against me! But how can you deal with the power of the Sage of the Six Paths?"
標籤
-- 推薦票
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3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
This is so good, I like the fact that he maintains the mindset of someone his real age, and like Daoist_Dan commented, a lot of red flags have been ducked, the only thing that can mess this up is bad romance or harem. Speaking of romance, author if you do decide to go the romance route or add it, is it gonna be a single love interest or harem(2+)?
As of chapter 5 things are looking good. No Chinese mc syndrome. He's not going to romance the young canon cast. In fact he's uncomfortable interacting with them because of his maturity. He's not plotting about a hundred things. He doesn't disdain the world or any of the characters. Just some dude who got a second life and is working to train his template. Obviously things will get more exciting later. But for now I'm glad the story is ducking all of these red flags. - Btw, you might have seen another Mihawk template in Naruto story. This is a different story. Not a repost like I originally suspected.