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50.1% The Great Demon System / Chapter 227: New Ability!?

章節 227: New Ability!?

Despite her best efforts, she, Avilia Graymore, the demon lord, had failed… A feeling that she had not felt in many years… Nothing but her heavy breathing filling the once again silent subspace.

Avilia stared at the kitten that was now nothing more than white dust in front of her fade away into nothingness with eyes of bewilderment. A flurry of complex emotions on her face as she tried her best to fathom what had just happened, her hands tightly clenched into a fist, no longer bloody from the kitten's innards as even that faded along with its body, stomping her feet with such vigour that the entire dimension shook once more from her might.

The entity that was supposed to serve as her answer and key to what Abilities were was now gone without a trace, its essence now being absorbed by Moby's dragon blood just like the last time.


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I hope you guys enjoyed the chapter, I tried to make it more concise and less descriptive than usual. It has come to my attention that my last 50 or so chapters felt really boring, slow, and dragged and I have to agree now that I look back at it. No one pointed it out to me so I only noticed when it was too late... My writing slowly became more and more detailed that It had gotten too much, from now on, I will try to be better, and I hope for your forgiveness. I would go back and rewrite the chapters but webnovel only lets you delete 100 words, From now on, things should be better! I promise! I really hope for your understanding! <3

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