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章節 222: Demon Training Camp

Moby sat on his soft bunk bed with his eyes closed, a clear vein bulging out of his forehead as he tried his best to concentrate, his frustration only growing the more he tried. 

For the past few hours, he had only 2 things on his mind, strengthening his household, and strengthening himself. 

The main way he had in mind to do such a thing was to try and teach every one of them how to access their demon transformations. As Avilia explained, just like how he, as a sin demon had sin mode, so did his household, each one possessing their very own special transformation, although admittedly weaker than sin-mode which was considered near or even at the pinnacle of the netherworld. 


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I hope you guys enjoyed the chapter, I tried to make it more concise and less descriptive than usual. It has come to my attention that my last 50 or so chapters felt really boring, slow, and dragged and I have to agree now that I look back at it. No one pointed it out to me so I only noticed when it was too late... My writing slowly became more and more detailed that It had gotten too much, from now on, I will try to be better, and I hope for your forgiveness. I would go back and rewrite the chapters but webnovel only lets you delete 100 words, From now on, things should be better from now on (Chapter 227)!! I promise! I really hope for your understanding! If you have any suggestions please let me know! :heart:

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